I LOVE THIS

This is wayyyyyyyyyy better than 50 shades..
The only thing I didn't like is how they screwed up. They're not that stupid. I get that they're humans with needs that makes mistakes. But can y'all really imagine Kakashi and Sakura fooling around this much in a mission which could cause their lives.
(Although I did enjoy the bath scene)
Not to mention, they're capable and how I keep telling Sakura to restrain Yellow and let Kakashi torture the guy for information. They both already confirmed that Yellow is their guy. Sakura need not to seduce him for information. That's inefficient. She's strong and she can easily knock him out.
But that's just my thoughts
It doesn't take away your talent in writing. I just wished it went in that direction..
BUT STILL LOVE THE STORY. APPRECIATED IT OKAY

Excellent story. I really enjoyed it.

best kakasaku fic ever. hands down. came to reread for idk how many times lost count I love it sooo much.

kakashi, you are a dead man.

I feel really bad for Kakashi, and I think you did a very good job describing the sensation of having one's mind and body hijacked. It's hard to explain.. like it almost directly put me in Sakura's mind where the words and acts were sexy and exciting, but in a far corner of my consciousness there was that terrible feeling that everything is extremely, extremely wrong.

While the above portion was great, the illogical and out of character portions of the story are unfortunately starting to lose me. The story refers to Sakura as one of Konoha's most powerful kunoichi, and Kakashi is well.. Kakashi. He's a top-tier shinobi, and it seems like in this story you're maintaining his status by using him as a measuring stick to show us how strong Yellow is. I get that love makes people do dumb things, but this is taking it too far. How is it that one of the strongest nation's most powerful ninja are this inept?

The both of them had already established that Yellow could easily be anbu-level and Kakashi is aware that some sort of brainwashing is going on with the women who go missing. They have no idea how this brainwashing happens - why are they taking such a huge risk (ESPECIALLY considering Kakashi's cover was already blown), and how does Kakashi not take into consideration that something might have happened to Sakura when he hears her acting far outside of the expected? Why does Tsunade know nothing about the dangerous complications of this mission? I like dark, gritty stories, and you've definitely set up a good tone with the setting and other characters. I just wish that Kakashi and Sakura had been written as more intelligent characters. It's like they fucked eachother's brains out, but in a comically literal sense.

I'm only at chapter 19, so for all I know you'll have them fixing their mistakes in later chapters. I'll continue to read more for now, with hope that the inconsistencies go away.

I've finished this story a few days ago and seriously I can't move on yet. THIS IS THE MOST PERFECT FANFIC I HAVE READ SO FAR. Seriously. It has Kakasaku of course, amazing plot, action, character development, exploration of feelings, well developed OCs (even the ones who appeared later in the story), horror to some extent (that led to Sakura's trauma), romance, humor, and a whole rollercoaster of emotions!

The chemistry of Kakasaku here sizzles so much I'm not kidding. Every interaction puts me on the edge, and every explicit sexual encounter made me wet so much, no shame. It's that good and intense.

I love the characterization of Sakura here. Unlike in other fics where she is stubbornly prude, here her discovery and development of her sexuality is incredible and realistic. She really toughened up and matured quickly but still retained that innocence, gentleness, and caring heart. She is extremely well written! I love how she bonded with the girls, how she cared for them. I love how she gained her confidence. And of course I love how bold she became when it comes to her feelings for her mission partner.

Kakashi. I just fell in love with him all over again it hurts. He's close to canon when it comes to his morals, responsibilities, and power but let's face it, given the situation he's in no wonder he fell madly in love with Sakura. And that bad ass climax! And the tears afterwards, how he feared he lost her, and then letting her go, and then when given the chance to be open about his feelings, he is the most loving man ever and oh my god I want to be his lover.

Oh, I like that seeing Kakashi's face made a profound effect on Sakura. She really realised how handsome he is and how attracted she is to her. I can definitely see this happening in canon! How I wish.

Thank you author for this masterpiece. This is the top Kakasaku fic I have read (and trust me I have read a LOT of long ass Kakasaku fics). Indeed a classic and I can say, THE HOTTEST KAKASAKU FIC EVER.

I've never had an angsty chapter like this. This gutted me for real :(

The bathroom scene really got me. Them losing their iron control... It's so hot!

Such a loving first...!

You're killing me with this chapter!

Poor Kakashi trying so hard to be a gentleman. Love it

Truly the best out of all the fanfics I've read. It's the kind of plot I've been eager to read and you gave it to me. Thank you for not abandoning this.

You don't know how much I appreciated this chapter

This had to be the most tastefully sexy, yet provocatively smutty fanfic that I've read. You have a talent! I don't think I've read a story with this much sex all the way through before. I normally get bored because it gets dully repetitive, but you somehow gave it believable variety with amazing character development. Great job!