Reviews for Bright Future
Guest chapter 24 . 5/25/2016
What happened to the rest of the story?
Guest chapter 15 . 6/25/2013
Anonymous fanfic chapter 24 . 4/11/2013
Lazaros chapter 23 . 7/9/2009
unfortunately i can honestly say i am disappointing with this story. You really took the focus off of Sena and the few times we do see him he is doing a rabbit imitation with suzuna. The story itself is pretty good however u kinda put me down when you strayed so far away from Sena. Good luck with your future stories.
Bar-Ohki chapter 24 . 3/5/2009
More romance? Fun fun.
Vetus Animus chapter 23 . 1/15/2009
OMG your story is awesome

But seriously, besides spelling and some continuity errors in earlier chapter this is the best eyeshield 21 story i have ever read.

Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon.
Bar-Ohki chapter 23 . 1/11/2009
I hope Suzuna tells Sena about the jerk so that someone can go about beating him up!
Bar-Ohki chapter 22 . 1/2/2009
Poor Juumonji, having Sena and Hiruma eat his team for breakfast like that.

Though I have to admit, Hiruma is a pro at comebacks.
Bar-Ohki chapter 21 . 12/15/2008
Short and sweet.

Nice update.
Jillian Leonhart chapter 21 . 12/15/2008
Aye! I'm waiting 4 your next update!
Bar-Ohki chapter 20 . 11/27/2008
I have to admit the college scene for this lot is pretty funny. I am amused on several levels.

Though sometimes you make it very unclear who is actually talking, its especially hard when your OCs are talking and it doesn't say who said what.
DarkestCornerOfMyMind chapter 20 . 11/26/2008
I LOVE this chapter! And I love your version of Sena. So confident, so cute!
Jillian Leonhart chapter 20 . 11/25/2008
What is it? What was Sena wanted to ask?
Harbinger of PIES chapter 10 . 6/10/2008
this story is great

are you going to introduce those teikoku alexanders?
lescribble chapter 1 . 4/22/2008
Your writing is unbelievably good. :)

There is too little HiruMamo involved... but that's just me.. Ehehe

Keep up the good work :)
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