|Reviews for Bright Future|
| MislavMagium chapter 8 . 8/19/2017
I DISLIKE THIS CHAPTER VERY MUCH BEACUSE IT IS LIKE SATANIST RITUAL AND CARVING SOMETHING ON YOUR SKIN IS SERIOUS CRIME AGAINST GOD
| Guest chapter 24 . 5/25/2016
What happened to the rest of the story?
| Guest chapter 15 . 6/25/2013
| Anonymous fanfic chapter 24 . 4/11/2013
UR STIRY IS AWESOME
| Lazaros chapter 23 . 7/9/2009
unfortunately i can honestly say i am disappointing with this story. You really took the focus off of Sena and the few times we do see him he is doing a rabbit imitation with suzuna. The story itself is pretty good however u kinda put me down when you strayed so far away from Sena. Good luck with your future stories.
| Bar-Ohki chapter 24 . 3/5/2009
More romance? Fun fun.
| Vetus Animus chapter 23 . 1/15/2009
OMG your story is awesome
But seriously, besides spelling and some continuity errors in earlier chapter this is the best eyeshield 21 story i have ever read.
Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon.
| Bar-Ohki chapter 23 . 1/11/2009
I hope Suzuna tells Sena about the jerk so that someone can go about beating him up!
| Bar-Ohki chapter 22 . 1/2/2009
Poor Juumonji, having Sena and Hiruma eat his team for breakfast like that.
Though I have to admit, Hiruma is a pro at comebacks.
| Bar-Ohki chapter 21 . 12/15/2008
Short and sweet.
| Jillian Leonhart chapter 21 . 12/15/2008
Aye! I'm waiting 4 your next update!
| Bar-Ohki chapter 20 . 11/27/2008
I have to admit the college scene for this lot is pretty funny. I am amused on several levels.
Though sometimes you make it very unclear who is actually talking, its especially hard when your OCs are talking and it doesn't say who said what.
| DarkestCornerOfMyMind chapter 20 . 11/26/2008
I LOVE this chapter! And I love your version of Sena. So confident, so cute!
| Jillian Leonhart chapter 20 . 11/25/2008
What is it? What was Sena wanted to ask?
| Harbinger of PIES chapter 10 . 6/10/2008
this story is great
are you going to introduce those teikoku alexanders?