|Reviews for Untwinning|
| Mathiilde3 chapter 1 . 8/16
My heart melts a little each time George gets his happy ending, which I prefer to be with Angelina, because he found it himself and not just because of alcohol or pregnancies, and this, oh my goodness this, it was so lovely and sweet and I laughed and I nearly cried and now I cannot stop smiling. I really, really adored it! Him generally, but with her, and then Fleur and/or Gabriella and with the children, and him and Angelina and the children, oh dear it was beyond lovely. Thank you for sharing, it was an absolute delight reading!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Beautiful. I alternated between wanting to cry, wanting to laugh and just being wowed. Great read.
| liltle chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
I really enjoyed reading the process of George's grief in this. Not too much, not even too little, it fitted right in with his years of being twinless. I like the part that you elaborated on Gabrielle and Fleur's characters. Its always nice to read about them with Victoire and Teddy.
| A.Pevensie chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Oh wow, I loved this! Loved the George/Angelina interaction and the storyline, of course, but I especially loved the characterizations of Gabrielle, Fleur and Victoire. And I love the idea of George and Gabrielle as Victoire's godparents. :)
| Anachronistic Anglophile chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
You put a lot of work into this; excellent results.
| Bad Mum chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Loved this. Love the progression of George's grief and his relationship with Gabi. Wonderful.
| Luna Rapunzel chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
This is lovely! You transition between the scenes well-you've incorporated a lot of characters and storylines into this, and they're woven together beautifully. I liked the "G without F" conversation between George and Gabrielle best, as well as the last line.
| EasyButton chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Aww, I love this. The relationship between George and Gabrielle is great. "We are both a G without an F." Brilliant.
| Lemondrop xxx chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
That was simply wonderful! Loved George and all the little snippets of Weasley/Potter trivia!
| sam chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
| random00b chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
I can't tell you how much I love this fic. Heck, it's been in my favorites for months. I especially like the last three sentences, esp. "He hopes that being George is enough. He hopes it like hell." Gah, that just gets me every time.
| monkeyface52 chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
AH! Love it! How did you fit so much into one chapter? I don't know, but it was great!
| excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
Oh, very good! (and this story shows another gap in the family-"Of course Bill wasn't going to ask Percy". If I were Percy, I'd emigrate to America or Australia-didn't Bill and Charlie both leave home the moment they could?).
But this story is about George, and how he learns to really live again. Yay!
| slytherinqt chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
OMFG! i loved it, and i have to demand a UPDATE, sequel, something! this is too good to leave Georgalina's relaitonship at that. This is siriusly awesome, omg, please,please,please, i beg of you to make another and make me the happiest 16 year old on this planet!
| Aravis'sSilverQuill chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
My God that was amazing. You are amazing! I should be asleep now! God knows I'll be cranky in the morning when I have to get up at 6am but damn I had to finish this! It was wonderful! Just wonderful!