Reviews for Untwinning
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Beautiful. I alternated between wanting to cry, wanting to laugh and just being wowed. Great read.
liltle chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
I really enjoyed reading the process of George's grief in this. Not too much, not even too little, it fitted right in with his years of being twinless. I like the part that you elaborated on Gabrielle and Fleur's characters. Its always nice to read about them with Victoire and Teddy.
A.Pevensie chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Oh wow, I loved this! Loved the George/Angelina interaction and the storyline, of course, but I especially loved the characterizations of Gabrielle, Fleur and Victoire. And I love the idea of George and Gabrielle as Victoire's godparents. :)
Anachronistic Anglophile chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
You put a lot of work into this; excellent results.
Bad Mum chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Loved this. Love the progression of George's grief and his relationship with Gabi. Wonderful.
Luna Rapunzel chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
This is lovely! You transition between the scenes well-you've incorporated a lot of characters and storylines into this, and they're woven together beautifully. I liked the "G without F" conversation between George and Gabrielle best, as well as the last line.
EasyButton chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Aww, I love this. The relationship between George and Gabrielle is great. "We are both a G without an F." Brilliant.
Lemondrop xxx chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
That was simply wonderful! Loved George and all the little snippets of Weasley/Potter trivia!

LD. x
sam chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
good story
random00b chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
I can't tell you how much I love this fic. Heck, it's been in my favorites for months. I especially like the last three sentences, esp. "He hopes that being George is enough. He hopes it like hell." Gah, that just gets me every time.
monkeyface52 chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
AH! Love it! How did you fit so much into one chapter? I don't know, but it was great!
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 3/8/2008
Oh, very good! (and this story shows another gap in the family-"Of course Bill wasn't going to ask Percy". If I were Percy, I'd emigrate to America or Australia-didn't Bill and Charlie both leave home the moment they could?).

But this story is about George, and how he learns to really live again. Yay!
slytherinqt chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
OMFG! i loved it, and i have to demand a UPDATE, sequel, something! this is too good to leave Georgalina's relaitonship at that. This is siriusly awesome, omg, please,please,please, i beg of you to make another and make me the happiest 16 year old on this planet!
Aravis'sSilverQuill chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
My God that was amazing. You are amazing! I should be asleep now! God knows I'll be cranky in the morning when I have to get up at 6am but damn I had to finish this! It was wonderful! Just wonderful!
The Sugarfaerie chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
Oh, George!

This was beautiful. You captured George's grief very well, and how Angelina starts to heal him.
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