Honestly, this was just straight creepy and the fact that so many readers think this is cute and romantic is concerning. I know Canon Edward was a bit stalkerish in the books, but this took it to another new level of creepiness. Why couldn't Edward have left the roses in other unqiue locations, instead of breaking into Bella's personal spaces? And the fact that Bella went from being creeped out and scared (as she rightfully should) to excited about this stalker? Because, I'm sorry but that's what Edward was in this story, a creepy stalker NOT a romantic secret admirer. This was just weirdanyone who thinks this is in any way romantic needs therapy. The only remotely romantic aspect of this story is the roseshonestly that's not even that romantic, because the locations Edward left them in were just creepy and invasive. No woman in their right mind would find this romantic, we live in a scary worldI can guarantee you, any sane woman would be freaked the hell out to find out a stranger broke into their carhome to leave a rose. We'd most likely assume it was a stalker or potential serial killer/rapist, that's just the world we live in and a normal response would be to contact someone like the police. Bella's dad is the chief police and she didn't even inform him someone broke into her room, not once but TWICE? Yeah I understand this is just fiction and this was meant to be lighthearted but I hust couldn't find relate romance with this, because I juet found it plain creepy and I think its weird that anyone thinks otherwise. You're writing is good otherwise, but I think the concept just threw me off and wasn't what I expected. That's just my personal opinion, it doesn't mean its a bad fic, but again the concept just wasn't for me. Sorry x

I loved this story! Thank you for writing and sharing!

This was really good you should do more like this

WHAT?! YOU WROTE THE POEM?!

Do you have any idea how great you are? that was an incredible poem!

Enjoyed the story.

I read this a long time ago, and I was happy I found it again. Edward is sweet.

Roses are so cliché

luv it very much

I loved! Please, continue
I want more, please

Absolutely beautiful.

Awesome!

Perfect!

lol I was right about him hiding in plain sight on her closet ceiling. :)

I totally forgot to tell you in chapter 4, but now that I've read the whole poem it's absolutely beautiful! And it is exactly something Edward would write. :) Now Bella can relax a little knowing who they came from, and be giddy.

lol Poor Bella!

Eric is such a little sweetie. I always liked his character. I keep wondering...where was Edward hiding in the closet? On the ceiling like a bat? *snicker*