Reviews for Breaking the Boundaries
Qex chapter 3 . 9/27
Your idea is good I will commend you for that..but for the sake of all that is holy you just have to make the kyuubi his zampakto is a bit..I don't know..saddening..lack luster..I mean why o why did you do that.?you have great idea point but you just have to destroy it by having the kyuubi to be his zampakto..know that zampakto is a part of one soul..Naruto and kyuubi was, is, and always be a different entity!how the fuck did this happen?! I really had hope for this story to be great..but after reading chapter 3 I don't know if it is worth my time anymore..I just hope that you will make a remake that is worthy..
Guest chapter 5 . 8/15
By how the story goes this makes me think if you are a right in the head
Fanficlover2017 chapter 6 . 8/12
I gotta say I really don't like your story, I mean Naruto going over to Danzo and root and then being used be them come on, that is so far outside of canon material it isn't even funny. If you going to write a Naruto fanfiction try to follow canon a little bit, Naruto going to root is not even in the realm of possibilities.
kynan99 chapter 1 . 3/24
Thanks
Kingkong101 chapter 9 . 3/7
What the fuck
OmegaUltima chapter 20 . 12/5/2017
Agh! You just had to apparently leave writing entirely on a cliffhanger, with oodles of other plot threads left alongside it? That's just mean...
SlyUzumakiVii chapter 13 . 10/23/2017
steal Kakashi's book shave Sakuras hair off and get Sasuke hooked on yaoi?! it has to happen that would be hilariousssd
SlyUzumakiVii chapter 6 . 10/22/2017
Honestly... I love this story! would be awesome if it became NarutoxHanabi especially since the age gap is lessened a bunch and you've gone into her character a bit. I love you Root OCs btw
RenegadeForLife chapter 4 . 10/4/2017
This is an interesting concept.

Isn't the Kyubi orange? Is that the joke?
Meh chapter 20 . 9/14/2017
Intriguing premise, mediocre writing.
Hipnyah chapter 1 . 3/29/2017
You know I like Itachi but the thing is when this was written you wouldn't've known his backstory so I can forgive it lol besides naruhina 4 life lol
Guest chapter 20 . 11/21/2016
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Guest chapter 6 . 11/12/2016
I've said this to other good authors that have done this with Naruto but... A Naruto that closes himself off from most people just isn't Naruto anymore.
prototype gear chapter 20 . 9/18/2016
Read it all through.

Holy shit, what a ride. And it ends on such a low note as well...

...sad to say that we'll never get an update to this story, but hey. That's life...

...so many things unfinished. So many questions unanswered...

...fuck. God fucking damn it...
doubledamn chapter 5 . 9/16/2016
If I may make a suggestion for Danzo on how to handle the Kumo Aftermath? Make it public. Naruto is now an honorary member of the Hyuuga Clan, Danzo can use those political connections to tell EVERYBODY what happened. Every Daimyo, every Kage, every merchant, every farmer, every trader, every mercenary group. They tell EVERYONE what Kumo did, how far Kumo can be trusted even under the flag of peace.

Coupled with the 'Bad Luck Campaign' that Danzo has planned, the lack of goodwill from the entire Elemental Nations should pratically crippple them.
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