Reviews for Takato: The Trouble With Bread
dragonsofthe8elements chapter 1 . 8/13/2011
you should make a sequil
logicalsense chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
haha. This is great! You probably could have added some dialogue though.
the-ice-cold-alchemist chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
ruff1298 chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
This was short but good. Mildly desciptive, humorous and overall a good Rukato. ;)
Azure Ghidorah chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
'Violet eyes threatening to murder him if his mind continued on the dark path it was walking' had to be my favorite line.

This was good, I needed a bit of humor, and what better way then with a little embarressment?
Ruki44 chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
aw, that had to be the kawaist thing ever, kinda short though...but well writen all the same
E.S. Simeon chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
Hm, although it is short I could see why you put things together into this small piece. For all this, I would say that it is not bad, I like it. It's got just the small touch of Rukato somewhere in there with the words that made it cute. Although better with a plot, it is still good enough for a quick Rukato read I'd say.
Hero Slayer chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
Hehehe, nice, i can picture it all. Glad to see your back
Depthmon chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
good story