|Reviews for Playing|
| shadesilver chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
it's pretty good...i just saw it, but i decided to say something anyway.
i think the thoughts are pretty apt...you got those right.
though Sakura's not really 'afraid' is she?
good job, anyway.
| Valzen chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
i liked the idea of playing with death and it definately fit with kakashi but you need to go bacj and clean up naruto's paragraph.
| Anon E. Mouse chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
Enjoyed. Very much so. The viewpoints are spot-on, and I love your thoughts on Kakashi (one of my favorite characters ).
Keep up the good work!
| Jecka07 chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
I enjoyed your story. I think you accuratly captured how the characters would view death. I especially liked the end that Kakashi protected them so that they could play with death by still being alive. Overall good job! Thank you for posting a short story worth reading.
| Ayame Shikyo chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
| Konoha's White Fang chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
although it's short but it's not meaningless i like it alot
| MikaSamu chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
Short, full of insight and perfect imagery.
| show.me.the.stars chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
That was really good. ::smiles::
I liked the way you discussed their feelings of death, it's so like them, which made this more entertaining.
Naruto laughs at it, Sakura glares at it, Sasuke runs toward it headlong, and Kakashi practically plays with it.
Kakashi's opinion of death was definitely the most hardhitting, and it made me smile, but in a sad way.
| A Ninja Named Frank chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
I liked this fic, it was short but too the point and it made me think a bit; keep up the good work. :)
| Devil Hinata chapter 1 . 1/8/2008