|Reviews for Another Chance|
| gishilron chapter 11 . 3/10
I like it so far, glad you are back to it
| flevantein chapter 11 . 3/6
Jumping ship?! That's...ugh I won't complain or comment about that. There are others that will do that probably.
3 years to wait do another chapter, perhaps many of this story readers almost give up for the continuation, so please at least finish it before you wrote anything else...
| Malchior chapter 11 . 3/4
I confess, I figured the memories were going to be the actual memories of Harry's previous life, instead of him narrating them.
I'm going to go out on a limb and guess that the nagging piece of information is that the ritual for Voldemort called for 'Blood of the enemy, forcibly taken' and that Harry willingly giving it up will mess up the ritual in some way.
People who state their preferred ship being Harry/Daphne, or Harry/Susan, or Harry/OC always kind of surprises me. The problem with those characters is they have little to no development or information about them at all. Most of the portrayals are fanon and have no basis in canon. For example, the idea that Daphne is the 'Ice Queen of Slytherin' has nothing to substantiate that claim from the books or interviews with JKR.
It's basically stating, I'm a fan of Harry/*blank slate* which is odd. Some people say Ginny doesn't have enough development (which is pretty much true) but we do have enough glimpses of her character in the books to get the picture of a hot-tempered pintsized redhead with a mischievous sense of humor.
However, being a fan of the Harry/fanon!Daphne ship is perfectly all right. It does tend to force a story with a smarter, more sophisticated, even 'cooler' Harry Potter. Any H/DG story also tends to involve a very powerful Harry, either magically or politically, usually both.
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/2
Oh, I just love this story! I hope you update real soon! The way you have Harry wanting Ginny there before the task to support him and hopefully not stop seeing him is so sweet. He really loves her and needs her support. I think you do a wonderful job with Ginny. She is everything you picture her to be in regards to Harry. She's loving, supportive, strong, helpful, and doesn't push him.
I love how you had her learn occulmence so fast given she was such a talented witch. People forget that because they had Hermione the book queen. Although she was very smart and a good witch even she was amazed at what the twins could do with magic. Hell, the Weasely's having exceptionally talented children was natural and part of the reason Ron felt so insecure most of the time.
Please please update soon!:-)
| mliyanagamage chapter 11 . 3/1
Great story, I assume the next chapter wont take another 3 years?
| j-aime-le-pamplemousse chapter 11 . 3/1
This is amazing, and I absolutely adore how Ginny and Harry interact. I can't wait to see how the third task goes!
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/1
Sorry but this story isn't good. So many problems from characterizing and to canon mistakes.
| nesciamema chapter 11 . 3/1
Can't wait to see what Ginny does to Harry and what she ran of to do...
| Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 11 . 2/28
Yay, she's not being a complete idiot. Of course not, it's Ginny. LOL Well, this should be interesting.
| Uglyman44 chapter 11 . 2/28
Holy balls an update!
Had to re read the whole thing to remember what was going on.
Still looking great, can't wait for more. Hope college has settled down for you
| MuggleCreator chapter 11 . 2/28
Odd change of ships. But at least you're trying to finish. Ooh, Ginny knows...now what?
| strangeways chapter 11 . 2/28
Always nice to see a story you thought abandoned get revived. Kudos for deciding to finish it, as unfinished stories are sad things.
The chapter itself is decent, though author's notes should never interrupt the flow of the narrative: they belong at the beginning or end, not in the middle.
I must confess confusion at the idea of being a fan of H/DG (by which I assume you mean Daphne Greengrass, as I'm unaware of anyone else with those initials in the books). It's basically the same as being a fan of Harry/Sally-Anne Perks or Harry/Morag MacDougall ... which is to say Harry/original character: the only thing the books tell us about any of them is a name. The only reason we know anything beyond that about Daphne is that Rowling mentioned her in an interview once, telling us she was a Slytherin who was part of Pansy's clique, and that her sister married Draco. People complain that Ginny was a minor character who lacked development ... but there are dozens of minor characters who have more significance than Daphne: anyone who got a longer of dialogue or a physical description, for instance.
But to each their own, I guess. :)
| timetable chapter 11 . 2/28
Maybe you could update nor often? I'm assuming you have a complete plot? Just skip bits and finish off the story, but do end it.
| Davi chapter 1 . 2/28
He is worried Accio wouldn't work. that is sooo wrong! the guy just survived the war!
| Selande chapter 11 . 2/28
I am loving this story! Even if you changed sides and no longer like H/G as much ;) I really hope you finish this story though - it's great! Keep writing!