|Reviews for Mute Until You Came Into My Life|
| Gleas chapter 19 . 3/5
| YetAnotherJanewayFan chapter 6 . 7/26/2013
I just want tostary by saying that this story idea is good. I cannot precede to finish this however. There are a lot of errors in this fic. The story is too narrow and it's hard to follow. The characters are so bloody OOC it's driving me crazy. Severus happens to be my favorite character and every thing I like about him: the attitude, the use of big words that make me both annoyed with him and love him, and most importantly his snark; are gone! Harry has no friends: none, zip, zero and that is what makes Harry Potter: Harry Potter. Remus is a bloody were wolf; if he smelled danger I'm sure he would have walked out of the house calmly with Harry in toe: come on! And Albus, where is his 'grandfather' tendency? Where is the insufferable twinkle? I like the idea of a nice Petunia and a nice Dudley. But a nice Vernon, that made the story so scary! I would have definitely liked it better if Vincent was the 'Real Uncle' and Vernon was the slob; always makes the story more enjoyable. Now, don't get me wrong, I like a bit of OOC! I think it's awesome how some people can play with the characters and still make them believable! This was not bloody believable! This was not a complete distaster; because you had an awesome plot that went with this, but it was close to it. Please consider reading 'When You Touch Me', the story is not mine, so you will have to google it, but is a really good read and one of the best examples of how OOC works with some people who play with their characters. I rec this in hopes that not only will you find a few pointers to help with the story; you may enjoy it as well. :D On that note; if you ever decide to rewrite this please PM me. I would love to give this another go when I'm not utterly and completely annoyed with the character and confused by the way the story presents itself. I also suggest using a beta! There are many people, including me; though I'm no expert by far, that can tidy this for you in a jiffy! I hope all goes well with future writings /works :D
| LaverdaHarleyIndian chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
No offense, but your beta kinda sucks. Made up words and lots of spelling errors kind of makes this a dull read. Sorry.
| anonymous chapter 3 . 5/10/2013
Your story is interesting but it is REALLY disjointed and hard to keep track of where you are/what year it is/what the heck is going on. I'm really confused. I like the idea but it's just too hard to follow.
| SoulCr chapter 11 . 4/10/2013
I'm sorry, I really tried to read and enjoy this story but the grammar is horrible. I'm guessing you and your beta aren't native english speakers. My suggestion would be to find a beta who speaks english and has some grammar skills.
| Elle Johnson chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
This is quite good, but it needs a little grammar and spelling clean up. If you want, I could do it for you.
| Taylor1991 chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
It's a promising sign that at least Dudley doesn't know about the abuse, maybe he'll realize that something is wrong and tell a teacher at school so that social services followed by the police will get involved. Remus is indeed correct, something is definitely amis. The scent is strongest in the room because that's where the worst of the abuse took place. I can't see how Petunia hasn't done anything yet. It's to bad that they have their own rooms since if they didn't he'd have probably made more friends...will he have any friends? It's saying something when even Severus wishes that he would act more like James. Loved it.
| Emerald Lylythia chapter 19 . 1/9/2013
Great story and I loved it. It was nicely written and interesting. Thank you.
| Lunacom chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
I know that molestation and rape is nothing to joke about but I'm reminded of that south park episode about the adventure club. My head is telling me that he is stealing Harry's essence and it's like a drug.
| Erudessa-gabrielle chapter 19 . 12/5/2012
THIS WAS AWESOME!
| tazztazz chapter 19 . 11/9/2012
hi this is a brillient story and even though you have no sex scene that i can read i find that i still think this story is an amazing one.
| KisaWolfz chapter 19 . 11/5/2012
Was pretty good. about a 7/10!
| Azrael Jinsei chapter 19 . 10/25/2012
Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed reading it.
| ladyivory01 chapter 19 . 10/23/2012
i'm 18 and want the sex scene for this chapter
to prove i'm 18 i was born 8/19/1994
| crazyloverblood chapter 19 . 10/22/2012
Im older then 18 can i have the yummy please?!