Reviews for Alone
qyqihotmail.com chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Ah, nice.

I have always liked sweet and short drabbles, as compared to tedious and detailed novella-imitations. Really, some of those are like wading through 6-feet thick mud! Utterly boring.

Anyway, great job.
Princess Moanna chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
Really nicely written. I can understand what you mean by making characters express what you can't say. Can't you update? I love the angst.
cinema lover chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Oh my, that was so sad I wanted to cry. I know the feeling all too well. Great job!
Frrghjjdswtu chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
I really like the way he repeats the same things, just framed differently...thoughts are never as ordered as spoken or written words, and I think you really captured that.

And I hope you're more cheered since writing that...! :)