|Reviews for Gundam SEED: Dust and Fire|
| SakuyaMiura chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Will you continue it? I hope you didn't abandoned it? I'd love to know what will happen next.
| phantomsadi chapter 15 . 2/15/2013
Plz o plz keep writeing
| Hitokage Higure chapter 15 . 7/23/2011
| kakita101 chapter 15 . 9/9/2010
Hey, this is very good so i was wondering when you were going to update.
| Yuna's Reincarnation-1 chapter 15 . 8/20/2010
Great fanfic! please update soon
| Kirinthor chapter 15 . 7/21/2010
really liking this so far, i hope you will continue :)
| Jimm chapter 15 . 9/2/2009
I've not tried GS fanfic before, but I liked this more than I thought I would. Thanks for sharing it with us.
| RipYaNewOne chapter 15 . 7/30/2009
Hasn't it been a year since the last update? Where'd you go? ._.
| Titan of Saturn chapter 15 . 5/8/2009
Okay, so, instead of "If he doesn’t have pickets out coming space for our location . . ." it should be "If he doesn’t have pickets out combing space for our location . . ." I was very confused for a moment until I realized what you were trying to say.
Also, above that, during the conversation with Nicol and Dearka, Athrun says “We’re going to try to force a piece, to stop this war from getting any worse.” which I'm pretty sure was meant to be “We’re going to try to force a peace, to stop this war from getting any worse.”
Finally, I was a little giddy when I found out Athrun was in command, because that is so cool. His uneasiness in regards to that is also very well done. Though I'm a little confused as to when Athrun received the rank 'Commander,' and maybe that's just me not remembering the series correctly, but I'm pretty sure he wasn't a Commander at this point . . . anyway, love the story! Good job and I wish you luck with future writings.
| Titan of Saturn chapter 14 . 5/8/2009
So, in the spirit of constructive criticism, I give you this:
In the sixth paragraph (including speech) of this chapter (fourteen) you have a sentence as follows: "Not that there desire along would pull it off."
I believe that you most likely meant to say "Not that their desire alone would pull it off."
Just thought I'd point that out. I didn't see any others. Absolutely love this story so far, will continue to read it!
| nxkris chapter 15 . 3/26/2009
wonderful sotry. i love this idea of having kira captured and still managing to get most of the people into their ship alliance with some new members. will you be updating? please do so soon.
| Jerrac chapter 15 . 2/16/2009
Hmm... Pretty good GS story. :D It's rather hard to find good ones...
Are you going to update it soon? Or did real life steal you away?
| Firecanburn chapter 15 . 1/3/2009
Great job, i can only hope you can update it once again :)
| Jason of Light chapter 15 . 10/2/2008
I love how your alternate setting turned out for the SEED plot. I am a bit concerned about how you intend to bridge the gap between SEED and SEED Destiny. Personally, I wouldn't mind seeing the Freedom and Justice making it out in once piece and facilitated into Destiny, as well as seeing the original five G-weapons there too. I am also going to ask if we will be seeing anything from the SEED Astray manga facilitated into the plot. Like Shiho's role in the situation, or Canard Pars (which has extremely good potential plot when it concerns Kira).
The extendeds/biological cpus... will they be piloting Nuclear Powered Mobile Suits? Or will they even be int he fiction at all? A simple yes or no answer here since I don't want it spoiled. And that reminds me, what about the three Astray girls? Will they survive this time around?
Anyway, take your time with this fiction. It helps.
| nejisoifon-lover91 chapter 15 . 7/22/2008
This is about ten times better then i expected it to be...no afence or anything. I really like it. Hope you update soon.