Reviews for Jaded Eyes of a Prodigy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() yes harry get your revenge! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry getting a mom just cute |
![]() ![]() Hi there amazing gripping story but I couldn't help but giggle when you described McGonagall as a tough old bitty, you've used the Scottish word for breastfeeding or boob depending on context I think you meant buddy |
![]() ![]() This is incredibly hard to read. The way you are formulating sentences and the amount of easily corrected mistakes makes you not want to read it. |
![]() ![]() Hey! I'm back for a re-read. Just wondering what happened to Simon? Is the elf no longer part of the class? Thank you for your hard work and stay safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Needs correcting in Punctuation. Aside from that, it's an interesting story. I'm certainly enjoying it once I'm able to make sense of it. |
![]() ![]() it was goood story it has more depth to it with art music learned |
![]() ![]() ![]() wtf is wrong with lilly? what a fucking cunt |
![]() ![]() Wtf is it with all this gays shit |
![]() ![]() Ah for fucks sakes don’t say you made him gay |
![]() ![]() ![]() Could use a touch up with some of the punctuation and grammar, otherwise I like it |
![]() ![]() Nie wiem,czy jeszcze bawisz się pisaniem,czy już nie…mam nadzieję,że to drugie. Nie wystarcza mieć pomysł,trzeba umieć go zrealizować. Nagromadzenie nieprawdopodobieństw i chorych, obrzydliwych scen nie wystarczy. Historia musi być napisana tak,by można było w nią uwierzyć i zaangażować się emocjonalnie w przygody bohaterów. Nie ma tu tego. Próbowałam to przeczytać i nie dam rady. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazingly dark and wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooooh... the Potter's are going to rue the day they were born. Especially when Harry enacts his vengeance. What they've done to him; placing him in an abusive household, being abused for the first 5 years of his life - knowing hate instead of love, and making his first kill all before he turned 6 or was, he 6 when he made his first kill? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is getting far too long for us to go to Hogwarts. Tf? |