yes harry get your revenge!

Harry getting a mom just cute

Hi there amazing gripping story but I couldn't help but giggle when you described McGonagall as a tough old bitty, you've used the Scottish word for breastfeeding or boob depending on context I think you meant buddy

This is incredibly hard to read. The way you are formulating sentences and the amount of easily corrected mistakes makes you not want to read it.

Hey!
I'm back for a re-read.
Just wondering what happened to Simon? Is the elf no longer part of the class?

Thank you for your hard work and stay safe!

Needs correcting in Punctuation. Aside from that, it's an interesting story. I'm certainly enjoying it once I'm able to make sense of it.

it was goood story it has more depth to it with art music learned

wtf is wrong with lilly? what a fucking cunt

Wtf is it with all this gays shit

Ah for fucks sakes don’t say you made him gay

Could use a touch up with some of the punctuation and grammar, otherwise I like it

Nie wiem,czy jeszcze bawisz się pisaniem,czy już nie…mam nadzieję,że to drugie. Nie wystarcza mieć pomysł,trzeba umieć go zrealizować. Nagromadzenie nieprawdopodobieństw i chorych, obrzydliwych scen nie wystarczy. Historia musi być napisana tak,by można było w nią uwierzyć i zaangażować się emocjonalnie w przygody bohaterów. Nie ma tu tego. Próbowałam to przeczytać i nie dam rady.

This was amazingly dark and wonderful.

Oooooh... the Potter's are going to rue the day they were born. Especially when Harry enacts his vengeance. What they've done to him; placing him in an abusive household, being abused for the first 5 years of his life - knowing hate instead of love, and making his first kill all before he turned 6 or was, he 6 when he made his first kill?

this is getting far too long for us to go to Hogwarts. Tf?