I correct: Story etc: 9/10
Spelling: 7.5/10
Grammar:4/10

You are brilliantly creative, this is an original start with a good and logical characterisation of Harry.
You have a few spelling errors, but for FF it is allright.
However your grammar is on the level of the average 10 year old (at least it would be in my country), especially your lack of commatation is horrible.
If you would take your time to check it over or let a person who can use proper grammar check it, this chapter (and likely the rest of the story) would be much more readable.
My ratings for the 1. chapter:
Characterisation/story/originality/build-up: 8.5/10
Spelling:6.5/10
Grammar:3/10
With the negativity out of the way, I am looking forward for the next chapter.

Learn to set correct commata!

That was the best chapter 1 to a Harry Potter fanfiction that I have read in years.

That was dark. I enjoyed it... but dark. haha. thanks for sharing.

im speecless. but dare i say, i was hooked. though i may not read the sequel because i was already satisfied enough. it's been a very dark trip. it left me quite disturbed and i am sure i will have daydreams for the next few days of this dark little child.

Loved this story! a truly dark harry fic.

Still annoyed by the Cruico. I'm pretty sure you mean Crucio and I wonder if no one has pointed that out or if you chose to ignore it.

D.A... how ironic

An amazing story, I've read it three times over the years and only hope the sequel will continue

I am done with this story over half of it is gays kissing and harry potter submitting to nearly every guy he meets the other half are songs the author copied and pasted.

This is getting good

This was a dark read... but soooo good! :D
Thxx 4 everything

I was I tears for Leon. His end was beautifully cruel. I applaud his devotion to Tristen.

I love this story so so much