Reviews for One Line
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
Brilliant! Absolutely amazing! I really enjoyed it!
autumngold chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
What a fabulous story! I love how Mac's hands won't stop shaking until he tells Stella the truth! I also like how Stella blames herself, even though the only one at fault is Andrew! Thank you so much for writing this story!
Lizicia chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
This is unbelievably good and so in-character. That was my exact thought after seeing the episode: he chose Stella because he would've been crushed if she got hurt. And Andy knew it, so he targeted her. So obvious. They could now admit it on-screen as well and everything would be good :D
lyner chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Moska chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Absolutely and simply * GORGEOUS *. Such a perfect look at the aftermath of that day.

EC, you have a very deft hand with these particular characters and I enjoy each and every story you produce.

Now, go write another one :) It's been woefully lacking in M/S around here lately! What's been posted has been well done, just not enough of it!

shawdoo chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
Perfect! I loved that Stella was wearing Mac's old shirt - nice touch. I hope you'll write more SMacked stories soon.
Denese25 chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
I really enjoyed this piece.

“He knew what you meant to me before I even realized it.” You captured Mac perfectly with this line!