|Reviews for Children of Orion|
| Where the gras is greener chapter 6 . 4/13/2008
This story was not really on the good side, do you know that?
First, for a MoO-story you hardly take advantage of the vast universe offered to is merely a decorative accessory, a rough form.
Second, the characters are lacking development as well as credibility. And you kill them way too fast.
Third, your spelling is bad. Not in general, mind you, but every other paragraph is a mistake that breaks the flow like waking up in a dream of falling.
On the other hand, I don't really like suspense or horror, that may have had influence on my opinion of your story.
| greg davis chapter 4 . 1/24/2008
keep it up and whats next please hurry up I must know.
| Taerwriter chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
OH MY gosd. YOu like MOO AND Bertrand Russell? One of my favorite games folled by one of my favorite atheists. Nice prolouge by the way- i'm going on to read Chapter 1