Reviews for Nurse Dawson
titanicandkhfanforever chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
I loved this story! It was so sweet! This is now officially one of my favorite Titanic short stories. Thanks for the great story!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
This was so sweet I cried! And also, love the disclaimer lol
iLiKeTrUfFlEs4510 chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
awwh!:) i loved it!:D I loved the storyline and was so happy when they found eachother. I was getting scared when he left, but those emotions are what makes a good story :) keep up the good work! I'll be sure to read more of your fanfics!
I.Dream.Of.Hardyz chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
Aww, what a clever idea for a story, her being a nurse and him being a soldier.

I loved this.

Totally cute. :D Great job.
Titanicfreak018 chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
I luv it! Its so sweet! You should write more chappies about their life together! Jack lives! YAY! (laughs histerically and is taken away to mental facility) LOL!
RMS chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
I think I'm in love... with this story! It's gorgeous, it's perfect! Love it, love it, love it!
Spunkalovely chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
Yea, the happy ending. *sigh* if only ending was as beautiful as this. I love it.
xxxTrojan-Princessxxx chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
Hi,

Well the first thing I want to say is what a wonderful plot! I love the idea of Jack and Rose finding each other during WWI.

Just a few little things. There are a few spelling errors, for example fell instead of feel, which is easy enough to do. ( I know I do it too)

Also you have the line "They stood there for what looked like hours" or something along those lines, just a little hint, you should change it from "Looked like hours" to 'seemed like hours'. It fits better and makes more sense. Also to do with the line I mentioned, you had them sitting down because you said that she sat down next to him and suddenly they were standing. I know that those types of errors are really easy to make, especially if you are focused on what you are writing, but it makes the story even better when they are corrected.

I'm not being picky, so please don't think that I'm being harsh, I'm just giving constructive criticism. :) So please don't hate me.

I did enjoy your story, and I thought that the plot was very original and really really sweet.

I look forward to reading some of your future work.
ThePotterGeek chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
loved it!
This account is deleted 3 chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
aww this is the best titanic oneshot i've ever read! you're an amzing wirter! YOU ROCK!

Sarah :-)
DreamUpAReality chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
That was SO AWESOME. I loved the plot. The character interaction was very successful... so Jack and Rose. The only thing I can say (constructive) is that I did notice a few grammatical erros. Very few, actually. But pretty good for over 70 words.

I don't know what else to say. This was a pleasure to read. However, I wish you would continue it instead of it being a one-shot. Maybe an epilogue? Or a sequel?
Starlight63 chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
a great story!