|Reviews for Heartstrings|
| Sweetie7smiled chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
| kiwihipp chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
A very kind Edward trying to make Esme feel comfortable in the home! Poor woman, to be so frightened, not knowing if she could do something without retribution!
| Woman of the Dunedain chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
You know, the thing I liked most about this story was the extra glimpse that I got into Edward's past, and the reasons why he feels the way that he does. I had never really considered before that he was the first to be turned, and that for many years he was almost alone with his extraordinary powers. I like to think that things would be a bit easier for him, as he and Esme become more accustomed to each other and she takes on the role of mother. Thanks for this lovely fic!
| abbyweyr chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
Coming back to leave a review on this one. Fits nicely with two other early Carlisle/Esme stories. It fits with a poem I wrote on Carlise and Esme too - family bound by love. It is what makes the Cullens a family.
| ALPS chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Aaww, Edward what a sweetheart you are! Really nice one shot, I like pre-twilight stories, this was a lovely glimpse of that time :)
| Sarahippy chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
So heartbreakingly beautiful. Well done.
| jennyap chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
| burtonbabe chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
such a great little story, it left me wanting more. i love stories of Edward, Carlisle, and Esme from this time. it would be great to have you continue these moments in their relationship. I also love 58nights, great story, wish it had a little bit more "M" moments, but all the angst is great too. loved "Anytime", would love to see you do more from that summer as well .
| Sugargirl5 chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Okay, now I'm really a broken record, but I can't tell you how much I loved this! Esme's so sweet and I can't believe she and Carlisle were so awkward in the beginning :). They love each other so much, and Edward too...
| trallgorda chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
Another excellent story!
| Elanor123 chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Love your stories!
| ritz27 chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
wow..that was very touching...esme, edward and carlisle's relationship is potrayed so well...love the way u've shown esme...one of my favs!
| DobbyWobby chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
this is just so cute. i love it, you've captured edward and esme relationship really well.
| ArwenGranger chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Esme's uncertainties about her position in Carlisle and Edward's lives seemed just right after what she had been through in her human live. I loved it.
| tersaseda chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Very beautiful. You portrayed Esme so perfectly-just as I imagined she would have been as a newborn. She was so used to just being a tool, as simply a means to provide others' comfort in her human life...it was interesting to see that carried over. And I like how gentle Edward is with her and that HE wants the mother/son relationship just as much as she does. Very sweet :)