Reviews for Snare
ninjaturtlelover101 chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
*sigh* I wish i could write stories like this keep it up! :)
Gnarled Bone chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Torn between laughing giggling at it - stuff like this just tickles me something fierce - and blushing redder than . . . well, I don't have an accurate analogy for that. Still red; I failed to do the former. e/e

Fate as a closet-tease is . . . wow. Why aren't there more? There are no words to describe (or I just don't know enough) how much I adore this. I love the fluff! I want it in my pillows to sleep at night. :3

Thanks for writing such a wonderful piece of fluff. :D
ZonaRose chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
The romance was good just enough to make you want more. I'm more in to smut but I still liked it.
devilhamster chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
hohoho fate really is well bold. (,,.,,) anyway thanks for the chapter its really a interesting one. love it very much.
Riveted chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Loved it, the perfect amount of love and romance! Thanks for posting!
Lance58 chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
i guess that was interesting :P next please make more
Blue Lone Wolf chapter 1 . 7/12/2009
:D

That was awesome. I love your subtle style!
Ms. Chidori Sagara chapter 1 . 5/7/2009
I'm quite curious. What did Nanoha do? D To make Fate so... ebil D
Ms. Chidori Sagara chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
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ErnestTheGuy chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
wow, this little one-shot is hot. and hilarious to boot. Nanoha's thought thru out are just plain funny and Suzuka and Hayate just added to everything. Fate is well.. Fate's just awesome. kind of sadistic but in a fun kinky way. hehe
Shintan chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
All I gotta say is:

I like Fate-chan on top.
DreamShadower chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
That was one of the best Nanoha/Fate stories I've read. Subtlety was good, very good. It was also great you managed to add humor to it.

Nanoha would still insist on seeing them. XD Stubborn very much.

Poor Arisa, she really is clueless. So very dense, epecially since Hayate and Suzuka didn't bother to fill her in. XD
chocoblue chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
yes! an awesome ero-ero fic! i LOVED it! there should be more lemons bout nanofate! y'know, i agree with you. fate-chan does seem to have a lot of different sides whenever she faces people. fate is one HOT tease! and doing those kinds of things while saying those kind of words to nanoha-chan makes reader-san very happy! VERY, VERY HAPPY indeed! _

poor arisa-chan. she didn't have a clue to what hayate-chan and suzuka-chan were talking about.
RinnX chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
I am LOVING the teasing side of Fate. Very sexy! *thumbs-up* /
Enraptured chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Ngg!

That has -got- to be one of the best N/F fics I've ever read!

Hot, believable, humorous and totally in character, though I can't help but wonder what poor Nanoha did to deserve such punishment. Or should I say reward? xD

Evil, naughty, sexy, teasing Fate for the win!
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