Reviews for A Change In The Forest |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! Can I have a Harry Lloyd please XD Is it... Rumplstikstin? Marian! |
![]() ![]() wtf? this is crap i'm sorry but when you see the love of your life back from the dead u don't yell "Lady Marion of..." it's just not done. Why is there some select group of people who belive that once someone is buried UNDER ground after being killed! that they can magicaly come back to life? and how OC was everyone? Marion giggling, Will and Djaq with spontaneous displays of public affection? marion saying stupid things. Oh and my last comment: this is also VERY boring because your writing style insludes insignificant details (a bit like Lord of the rings - Aragon looked at the rock, Frodo looked at the rock, aragon sighed, Frodo sighed) and it was all together terrible. You could be a great writer if you just tested your plots maybe and thought things through before you type them out. Please think! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED IT! do you happen to watch Doctor Who? I'm guessing you do because of the names you picked for Allan and Iris's Twins... |
![]() ![]() ![]() yea she goin into labour! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, I love a happy ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome . Yay carter isnt dead. I love the3 happy ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love . Awesome twist of guy being kicked out of the castle. I cant wait to see who the guards are. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHO? and YAY! I'M MARRIED TO MUCH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great loving it x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! Sorry I didn't review the last one, I didn't get an e-mail saying it was up. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() well...that's what they call him on the show...Little Little John...wait...then wouldn't Little John be...Big Little John? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! Just one question, how does Much know Diana? Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() L.J or L.L.J for little johns son - tht was so funny with much at the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() so cute. Yay Will and Djaq got married. |