Reviews for The Redemption Clause: Book 2
Guest chapter 5 . 1/31/2021
Great story. Shame it's abandoned :(
Guest chapter 5 . 1/19/2017
Please finish this
Magyk of Fyre chapter 5 . 2/21/2016
It's been almost two years since the last person reviewed this, and you're probably truly and utterly sick of people asking after an update because it's now been eight years since you published Book 1 and 2...

So I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this fanfic. I especially liked the way that you characterised Syndrome/Buddy after the jet plane incident.

Since it's also been many years since The Incredibles came out, it's going to be quite interesting to see how The Incredibles 2 turns out (when it finally comes out within the next few years) and if Syndrome somehow managed to survive like he did in your fanfic.
PeaceLightVictory chapter 5 . 4/10/2014
Please, tell me you are going to continue.
Diamondlove2001 chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
so well detailed and well written, although there are few errors it is marvelous! I fell in love with the first book and I am VERY excited for this one THANK YOU.
Tloakk chapter 4 . 1/7/2014
Oh and I know it's been five and a half years and you have your own life, but... If you have the rest if this story perhaps, or were willing to finish it, even a little bit, I would appreciate it. I know you've been getting these for years but... A girl can hope. Sorry. And thank you. It's just such a great story.
Tloakk chapter 5 . 1/7/2014
It's been over a year so I know you're not coming back, but I have to say that these were very good stories. Loved them. And in my heart Vi, Buddy and Ro got to live together as a family in the end. Yep. Happily ever after. Have to believe it.

Thank you for writing these. I've gone through just about all the synlet so I didn't expect to find any more. Thank you.

cuzimaw3som317 chapter 5 . 10/1/2011
Please update soon!
DuchessofSomar chapter 5 . 6/27/2011
As I have said on deviantart...whyyyyyyy why have you forsaken usssss? T_T DX update! FOR THE LOVE OF GOD AND ALL THINGS HOLY! THIS IS THE BEST FANFICTION I HAVE EVER TRUELY READ! YOU MAKE ME CRY AND GO AWWWW WITH YOUR STORIES! WHY AM I STILL TYPING IN CAPS? OH YEAH CUZ I WANT YOU TO UPDATE! ... *sobs* please update soon its been so LONG! 5 years i think? surely your grand mastery skills of writing have improved over the span of half a decade, you could be a WRITING LEGEND! or wait do you already have books published? that wouldnt surprise me. but stilllll you must update! pick up this story, dust it off, and resume it for the sake of your readers. ...please?
Concolor44 chapter 5 . 9/14/2010

... and "Woe is me?"

... and "Holy frakkin crap! It's not complete?"

I got to the end of Book One and it WASN'T THE END as you very well know! I freaked. I went to your profile. I looked through your stories ... AH-HA! There it is! Book Two. Hot puppies!

But I didn't notice that it wasn't complete. This is not to say that I wouldn't have read it, because I would have anyway. But to come to the place where the story stops, and then discover that it isn't finished, ESPECIALLY when the tale is so easy to relish, is QUITE the letdown.

Aaaaaand you haven't updated in two years. That usually means that you've abandoned the story. That would be a darn shame.

Well. Here's hoping. I'm subscribing to the story.
sheepnamedpig chapter 5 . 9/3/2010
It's so hard to find good Synlet fics now a days, but it's been a few years since the film came out, so I guess that's just the way of things. It's kinda funny, though, because I got into your stories through KKBB, which also came out a few years ago but is waaay less known than The Incredibles.

I don't know if you have any plans to continue TRC, but if you do, I'm sure that I won't be the only person scrambling over themselves to read it. (And if you could also update 'Case of the Stone Snake,' well, I just might die and go to heaven. After reading it, of course.)
Chaos Dragon chapter 5 . 6/18/2010
i find myself rather desperately hoping you'll continue this. after 2 years i've not much hope, though. i'm off to scalp your lj and da and hope more is there. this is really great.

misframe chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
I only review good stories. And guess what, you're a LUCKY one! But yours is not good though. Yours is AWESOME! Too bad it's a dead fic. I hope you change your mind and continue this! :]
Irish Neko chapter 5 . 4/5/2010
I love it :3
orgasmicgratz chapter 5 . 2/24/2010
Cliffie... and no relief in sight. Between this and your Sabertooth/Kitty fic, I'm in love/hate with you. I hope you spontaneously find the time or motivation or both to continue either of them, you've got so much talent and I want some moar naow plz... But I understand what real life does too, so... just know I've really enjoyed reading what you've posted :)
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