|Reviews for Homo homini lupus est Translation|
| shakespeare's sister chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
Lovely story, very nicely paced. My only criticism would be slight moments of awkwardness with your language (and I'm guessing English isn't your first language? In which case your writing isn't just good, it's spectacular!) which would be easily sorted with a beta reader. That's all that could be improved, otherwise this is great, fantastic job!
| fallenfromgrace17 chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
:-D I loved it!
| milayy chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
Hi! Really liked your story! Though i saw more drama than humour in it. You should write a sequel!
| MatoakaWilde chapter 1 . 1/9/2008
It was interesting reading a rough translation. But honestly, where are people here who are supposedly fluent in English that have horrible glarring errors (your story did not). There were a few sentences/phrases that were awkward but overall it was an enjoyable piece!