Reviews for Tobi Meets Ibiki
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
LOL! tobi is sooo cute in this one!
nuevopizzicato chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Ibiki is REALLY... Really a patient man i've ever know.. o.o
ravenlaw13 chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
this is a cute and a very good story!
SilentSable chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Awwww! So cute do more! Do more! I love the fact that akatsuki came to save him!
Betacat chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
That was so adorable. It was such a cute idea! Good job, I was giggling the entire time.
yolen chapter 1 . 10/5/2008
Illogical. Crackish. Lacking in grammatical correctness. But somehow, I was unable to give it the loathing I normally reserve for stories like this.

...In yolen-speak, that means I like it. Nice job. :D
Oro-kun chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
LOL! I love it! It's funny. I absolutely love this version of Tobi not the Madara version lol.
CelticCherokee chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
It's nice to finally have a funny story about tobi getting kidnapped... though you did spell Itachi and Sasori wrong...
RK-Striker-JK-5 chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
Oh, that was too adorable. i think Ibiki might've had a stroke if it went on too much longer.

Tobi is a good boy!
YourAngelStandingBy chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
I liked Tobi better this way than the way they have him in the manga... all evil, and conspiratorial...

Such a cute story! I bet Ibiki wanted to face-palm like a billion times. lol

That's all I have to say!

-Angel
asmin44 chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
OMFG! that was too cute!

man yu hav to luv tobi to write this...

wait ...

r yu a dude? or a chick?

uh oh...

00

idk!

Im sorry !

*Runns away from computer* IM SSOry!
Fluffy Bunny Slippers chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
I feel so sorry for Ibiki. Asking questions and getting nowhere. Kinda reminds me of a 5 yr. old that I babysit. Only in that case it's getting said 5 yr. old to listen/be quiet/behave. Where do children get their energy? Sorry for rambling. Cute story.
Schizophrenic-Brat chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
ROTFLMAO! Funny as hell and is CUTE! _
Muria chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
That was cute! Tobi's adorable. An idiot, but an adorable one.

Kakuzu and Deidara rescuing him made it cuter. But, the conversation between Ibiki and Tobi was so funny. I giggled through it because I can just see that happening.

The only thing I can criticize is the format you used for dialogue. Quotation marks instead of script format just convey a lot more emotion... And I don't really think script format's technically allowed, but I could be wrong. I haven't been on for long...

Regardless, this is really cute. :)
JesusWillSave chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
Aww! That was cute!
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