Finish the fanfic for gods sake

She doesn't know what shit means?

Theres really no such thing as a red and black Transer, but it can just be a red Transer so then, Deadpool is registered with the Leo Sattelite Server (stuff from the MegaMan StarForce games).

What the hll? I pushed the login button and my review was annoymous? Ah the wonders of modern day technology. Anyway the other review was mine. Love this story. Good job and please update soon. Also Matt the Batman fan, it's not battle network, it's starforce. You called it battle network 3 times so I thought I should let you know. Oh and Kap'n Deadpool, if your looking for more great DP videos watch Deadpool PSA. It's got about 13 episodes and each one is hilirous. You can find it on youtube.

TTFN.

Pal you are a genius, pure 100% grade A genius. I love Deadpool and he's totally in character.

"What's shit?"

"I'll have to show you some time."

That line almost made me die laughing. And I love how Deadpool likes Geo's mom

In fact I feel a song coming on:

~Geo's mom has got it going on

she's all I want and I've wanted so long

Death can't you see your just not the girl for me

I know it might be wrong but I'm in love with Geo's mom.

If Deadpool sang that...wow...just wow. And someone said not to make it go too over the top. I understand where that person's coming from but it's DEADPOOL FOR CRYING OUT LOUD! Add a little fourth walk breakege and you got Deadpool nailed. (not like that, pervs)

So Deadpool says hello to Geo's mom by spying on her in the shower and then he reacquaints himself with Geo by telling him that his mom is hot. Am I the only one that thinks that Wade could do with a "How to make a proper introduction" lecture?

Your conversation with Wade was pretty spot-on, at least during a fight. The transformation of the bull creature was pretty well described (although I have to admit that my lack of knowledge about Battle Network left me a little confused). The only thing I really have to nitpick about is that a little bit more could have been dug to deep into Geo and/or Wade's mindset while all this was taking place. Still, the fight scene was good and the battle chatter was sturdy.

I'm Deadpool, and I've just spent the last twenty minutes ogling your mom while she was taking a shower.

Hell of a way to introduce yourself there, Dead Man Wade.

I'm not sure why but you make Deadpool appear a lot more "at home" in this story then you do in the other ones. Maybe it's just because I'm just not familiar with the Battle Network series but Wade's humor just seems crisper here.

And it seems to me that Megaman knows who Deadpool is. Is there more behind this little mystery?

I'm still not sure if I get the whole Deadpool chooses to get hit by a truck thing. Maybe I just have to read it again. Oh well, good stuff.

Interesting. I'm not really well informed on the Battle Network series of games (more of a classic Mega Man fan) but I liked the way you wrote the Wade Wilson of a future. Poor guy had the world grow up without him. His interaction with Min was also pretty entertaining, with Min turning authoritative then chatty in a matter of seconds (somebody should really tell her that something like that doesn't really persuade other people to listen to you).

So, good stuff.

Very Good

thare is not much Luna/Geo

It's okay! :D I really loved the chapter _ I found it really cute and Deadpool amused me. But yes, I'm just happy you updated! :P *easy to please*

And Thank you for the advertisement at the bottom T~T It made me feel special

Sorry about the last message i was hasty and in a bad mood YOU WILL NOT HEAR ANY MORE BAD COMMENTS I promise

Yes, I was the first to review. I am glad I did too. This is gonna be a fun read.

Good so far dude. It goes a more appropriate pace than other stories. Only one problem: the swearing could be toned down a little bit. The "F" word is a little harsh for Marvel. But, considering this is a fanfic, I guess it's ok as long as you don't go over-the-top. Keep going.

Yay! Update! Deadpool is a perv :P Insane and a perv. But I enjoyed it _ Can't wait for the next chapter too~

Interesting... I'll be looking forward to more~ The description intrigues me.