|Reviews for Tears Must Fall|
| MixBerkaan chapter 2 . 10/21/2014
I love it, but just want to point out one small error that doesn't really effect anything,
A Masochist is someone who likes being IN pain.
A Sadist is someone who likes INFLICTING pain.
Like I said, really small detail. Have an awesome day!
| Tacolady22 chapter 5 . 9/13/2014
That was beautiful
I could feel all of the heartache and anguish in this story.
Most writers have too much anguish and it just gets boring.
But this feels perfect.
Greatest Edwin story in my opinion.
| Yusari Michaelis chapter 5 . 8/31/2013
I wanna cry but can't this was a very touching story
| OmangoOlemonadeO chapter 5 . 2/21/2010
So SAD! I almost cried...
but then turned really sweet!
| Nyago chapter 5 . 2/11/2010
Can't say I agree on the part where Winry thinks she's useless or not strong enough because believe me the amount of abuse that girl took from Series one up until the movie from those two, takes a lot of strenght to accomplish. But its a fanfic, anything is possible...XD
Still I would have wanted Winry not to bash herself that way...even though got Ed to react to it enough to kiss her. (Which was cute btw) And yeah, you better hold on to that boy Winry, he likes to move around far too much for a boy almost 20's years old (or assuming he is) Overall, cute fic. Im shock its now that I find it...XD
| Kai-Cresent-Moon chapter 2 . 7/13/2008
“Oh shut up, you just like to cause me pain. Masochist,” Edward teased back. Her laugher filled the room. She loved to laugh, but only with him. To the rest of the world, she showed only a cold politeness.
Uhm, Just one thing. A Masochist: is someone who enjoys RECEIVING pain. A SADIST, however, is what would be more apt. Sadists enjoy GIVING pain.
It's just a minor detail I'd like to point out. I love the story.
| Hotaru83 chapter 5 . 6/10/2008
It was a sweet story
| KAZEONI chapter 5 . 5/25/2008
Such a cute story I love it Ed and Winriy are a perfect match.
| emskitkat chapter 5 . 2/7/2008
That was quaint story )
Good job! I enjoyed your descriptions and emotion. It was all pleasantly vivid without tasteless graphics.
| DarkestScars chapter 5 . 1/19/2008
Dang Girl, you really know who to write.
Love this story. Its just so cute, and sweet.
Keep them coming.
| Inuchemist10 chapter 5 . 1/14/2008
That was great! My hear is pounding away! I guess I am a sucker for fluff!...and sex!
| Hiddeninthedark93 chapter 5 . 1/12/2008
Aww what a cute story! I usually don't comment, let alone read these stories, but I gave it a try. And yours was good! I loved it. Thank you.
| Fantasy Fan Girl chapter 4 . 1/10/2008
I love this chapter, It's so good when he kisses her after telling her to shut up. It might be a little ooc (really I can't tell if it is) but I loved it. Keep writing.
| S J Smith-Evil Little Dog chapter 5 . 1/10/2008
This was very sweet. I enjoyed it a lot.
| Automailjunkie44 chapter 5 . 1/10/2008
Wow i really really liked it great job! I just love EdxWin pairs and you did a great job with your fic! I loved it! :)