Reviews for Memories Upon Broken Glass |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Striking story, I actually felt my heart jump when Adrianna shot that poor girl, but then it was just a dream. You managed to make me really care very quickly about two characters I had only just met, I can't put my finger on what does it but its very effective. Keep it up . I look forward to seeing how Adrianna's character develops after this incident... Your writing seems very speech based,which works well, but it would be nice if you fleshed out the descriptions a little more for us here and there but everyone has their own style, right? An excellent first fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely one of the most chilling and tragic stories to hit the archive. I give this one top marks, and would definitely like to see Adrianna agian. |