Reviews for You'll Be The First Thing I See
Guest chapter 20 . 5/9/2014
So I am crying and my cat is judging me and this is so beautiful thank you.
ShelbyTheGreat chapter 20 . 2/8/2014
this is the first story that made me truly cry. it was so amazing.
Guest chapter 20 . 6/16/2013
This is definitely what I needed to read :D

It sticks to the plot, kinda of and it's believable enough to be imagined as a Death Note episode.

The last chapter made my eyes water but I didn't cry. I wish I did, though D:
Guest chapter 17 . 6/16/2013
Guest chapter 15 . 6/16/2013

Besides that, I'm wondering if this is an AU that Light isn't Kira, because there's no Ryuk
Guest chapter 13 . 6/16/2013
Guest chapter 7 . 6/16/2013
lol 'cuddle'
Guest chapter 6 . 6/16/2013
Are the chapter titles song lyrics? I feel like they are..
Guest chapter 5 . 6/16/2013
Raito wanted to role his eyes;

I think you meant roll...
Guest chapter 4 . 6/16/2013
I'm drinking tea right now o-o
Guest chapter 3 . 6/16/2013
I can easily imagine this chapter being in the anime and I love fanfics like that.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/16/2013
This fic is amazing...
Izaya-Orihara's-Mikado chapter 20 . 2/12/2013
How did he die? That is my only question...
cellaria chapter 20 . 1/23/2013
well the end was stupid.. you should've just made it happy since it didn't fit that well.. & it completely cheapens light's words & makes everything he's saying seem pointless & stupid. if he really cared much less loved L he wouldn't be killing him lol obviously.. ''i love you so much that you're dying right now! oh wait..''
Jessica chapter 20 . 11/14/2012
That was beautiful. I don't review often, because I hate taking the time out of reading, but this story was worth it. It made me cry. The second to last paragraph seems familiar to me, and I loved it. Thank you.
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