|Reviews for Science, Fate, and Revenge|
| HUBERT chapter 1 . 4/11/2008
I love it! I demand more! MORE MORE MORE!
| Estrelita Farr chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
That's a really nice piece of one-shot. It's interesting how both of them met (before the point in the actual game storyline) because of Ryu... and Teepo, in Rei's case. D
The storyline flowed really nicely and the characters are portrayed very well, while the friendship between the two are really well developed (sorta). It's also interesting how Momo wants to honour Ryu by doing something like that in McNeil Village; I wouldn't have thought of it!
The only thing I have to complain about is some minor grammatical error (the only one I remember is a forgotten comma before a closing double quote in a speech), but nothing bad enough to hinder the quality of the story
Great work! D
Feverishly juggling work and her BoF3 novelisation. T_T
| Lunoin chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
I really like how you portray the characters in this story. The part with the laugh was a particular favorite, very nice insight into Rei's psyche.
Added your story to my story alert list, can't wait for the next chapter :).
| Enkdosu chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
I love it! Very well written and enjoyable. Characters were all very believable as well as the plotline.
And I always know when I read a good story when I don't want it to end .