|Reviews for Giving Life|
| That70sWriter chapter 8 . 1/23/2013
I really love this story, and idk how old it is, but can I just point out the only thing that annoys me? (Sorry if I'm being too critical, I've just seen this in a lot of future JxH stories.)
Why do people always make Hyde out to be a blameless angel, whom everyone sides with?
Like, I've noticed that everyone makes Jackie HORRIBLEY represented, she never told him b_tch, or she never told daughter bad mother.
I mean, in my opinion, despite loving Jackie and Hyde deeply, he was an a_s to her... a lot.
But anyways, good writing. Good story.
| Starfish chapter 15 . 9/3/2009
I love this story! Please write a sequal i'm really intrigued! But if you did write a sequal i dont think you should leave Hyde/Jackie out of it completely. Love the characters you've created.
| fiftyshadesofdevingray chapter 2 . 6/30/2009
You killed Fez! :( oh well great story.
| Tiian chapter 4 . 9/10/2008
I just want to correct one tiny little thing about blood type.
As an example. My mother is A-type, my father B-type. I am AB. So it doesn't match either. There is no quarantee that parents share bloodtype with the child. So the hospital wouldn't probably be putting their bets on that.
Also usually hospitals do carry enough blood for normal surgery and besides the amount one person can safely donate is around 500ml so it is not much. One surgery may require ten times that amount.
Still, this is fiction so I guess stuff like this doesn't matter so much. It just puts a bit more realism into the fic if these things are done right.
Other than that, I think that you have managed to nail the characters type of speaking quite well.
| zomganonymous chapter 15 . 8/25/2008
Love this ending. I can't believe it took me so long to read it!
| XXspuffster101XX chapter 15 . 8/20/2008
definitely wasn't the ending I imagined...but I'm glad everything worked out for Jyde...T/T made an interesting secondary story so I wasn't too concerned with how things ended for them...at first I figured that he was lost during the war or something...that would have been another interesting way to end it...I'm actually curious as to what this computer program thing is you had him working on to cause him to be kidnapped...so if you decide to continue with a sequel, then I'm all for helping out if and when I can if and when you decide to do it
| XXspuffster101XX chapter 13 . 8/18/2008
also, I ment to say in the last chapter that I am totally with you on the disapointing ending of Breaking Dawn...I thought there would be more of a fight, but they just gave up because Bella made it an even fight with her mental shield and then happy everafter for one and all...at least in Harry Potter, she wasn't afraid to kill some of the main characters everyone loved before giving the gang a happy ending...heh...okay...about to get kicked off the computer so I'm gonna stop rambling
| XXspuffster101XX chapter 12 . 8/18/2008
i was about to kick you when I started reading this chapter...Red isn't supposed to die until he's like 99 years old and still threatening to put a foot up someone's arse...heh...okies...off to finish the story
| XXspuffster101XX chapter 11 . 8/18/2008
boy oh boy did I fall behind with my stories...that's what happens when you don't have internet access for a few weeks and your time is spent sleeping and working...heh...anyway...I love that you put a Secondhand Seranade song into the story...I met him at the HOB when he was down in NOLA with Powerspace and Hawthorne Heights, and someone else, but I can't remember the bands name...anyway...he's a real sweet guy and it's so great that he's doing so well for himself and I'm getting off the subject of your story...I was just gonna read straight through to the end, but I wanted to mention SS...anyway...it would figure that Hyde wouldn't have grown out of the jealousy phase where he just runs away without finding out all the facts...but at least there was no alcohol and nurses and strippers involved...I hope you don't kill Red off...so I'm gonna stop rambling and read the rest of the story...oh...and thanks for letting it run it's corse with a few extra chapters
| jackiehyde4eva chapter 15 . 8/16/2008
Omg omg wow unexpected i cant believe it so much drama i love it thank you so muchfor writing this story its freakin awesum anyway if you do decide to write a sequel i am totally backing you like 100 percent great job xoxo
| Hyde's Bride chapter 15 . 8/16/2008
ok I have a few things to say (as usual right? lol)
1. You better write the damn sequel! There is WAY too much open here!
2. I really don't think you need to write a depressing story where they don't end up together. I mean that's why we read fanfiction. Because the actual writers screwed us over and we need our happy endings. I'll still love you if you do make a sad one. I'll just get mad at you briefly. lol just don't make "Are you ready for more" the one with the bad ending cuz I'm really excited about that one!
3. This was a really great story! I loved it so much. You did an awesome job with it!
4. Lastly, You rock! I love you tons, Allie! :)
| jackiehyde4eva chapter 14 . 8/14/2008
oh my gosh i was smiling this whole chapter its awesum and i know theres still a epilouge thingy but im sad its over great job xoxo
| Hyde's Bride chapter 14 . 8/13/2008
Yay! I'm so happy with this! Great job sweetie. I love Tiff and Jackie's relationship, and I'm so freaking glad that this is ending happily!
I'm off to read breaking Dawn! Nice job, Allie!
| Hyde's Bride chapter 13 . 8/10/2008
Yay! The end of this chapter made me so happy! I wish I could give you a big hug right now! Great job sweetheart :)
| jackiehyde4eva chapter 13 . 8/10/2008
Whoo hoo! omg i literally cheered when the kissing came awesum job cant wait to see what happens