|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Unlocked Knowledge|
| sbuko2002 chapter 15 . 7/15
| JasperK chapter 15 . 7/12
A most interesting exploration of the possible relationship between Harry and Tom. enjoyed what you put here.
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/30
"It was equally possible that his behavior was all an act to establish his role as a spy for the Dark Lord".
Actually the opposite is true. If he was really a spy, he would act so that nobody suspects he is a spy. You don't see him around Voldemort talking about Dumbledore's greatness, just to make Dumbledore think that Snape is his spy. Dumbledore not only stated in public that Snape was his spy, the very fact that he allows Snape to behave the way he does announces to everybody that he still considers Snape his spy. Not to mention that in doing so he allows Snape to reduce the number of students with potions NEWTs, and they are needed for potions masters, healers and aurors. So Dumbledore knows a war is coming, and allows Snape to reduce the number of potential healers and aurors. So on which side is Snape? And on which side is Dumbledore, the so called greatest Headmaster of Hogwarts?
And why do people insist on bringing Hermione and Ron together? Do you want them both miserable? Rowling claims to have laid hints about them, but when the first is that Hermione berates Ron because he has food on his face before the sorting, you can't take the rest seriously. Ron is probably just the only one who didn't clean himself. And them bickering like an old married couple that should have had their divorce long ago? Even Rowling doesn't describe Arthur and Molly Weasley as bickering, and they are an old married couple.
The whole series is a tragedy, and the epilog even more so. Ron has no respect for muggles, Hermione's parents are muggles. He admits the he used magic against muggle, which is hopefully illegal, and the head auror does nothing about it. Corruption as always. Why does he even need a driving license, and if he wants one, why can't he learn enough to earn it? He is still as lazy as he was in school, while Hermione is ambitious. They have almost no common interests. The only explanation is that Hermione still has such a low self esteem that she thought she wouldn't get anybody better than Ron.
| Fast Frank chapter 7 . 4/19
Again, Dumbledore proves his worthlessness as a leader. If Dobby could find 4 Privet Dr. surely some House Elves could have been sent to rescue the soon to be victims.
| Fast Frank chapter 2 . 4/18
"Restroom" is actually too new a term for Dumbledore to be likely to use. Since this is a residence, "bathroom" is more likely or the British "WC" (water closet).
| Fast Frank chapter 1 . 4/18
At least Harry thinks Dumbledore had less talent in wandless magic; he wouldn't know about 'the deathstick'.
| Archleone chapter 15 . 4/2
It's been four years since your last update, so you really should pick up the pace a bit before you end up disappointing your readers by missing the five year mark.
| aaronhowser1 chapter 15 . 3/28
Nooo! That's the worst cliffhanger! I was really looking forward to seeing how that played out! Ahh I want to scream
| Gojin1990 chapter 15 . 1/28
oh god please tell me you still might work on this. this is a most EVIL cliffhanger if you leave it here :O
| Gojin1990 chapter 12 . 1/28
O.O so he is a mongoose or something? the perfect predator against a snake? or maybe some kind of bird of prey? you ever plan on completing this story?
| Talonis Wolf chapter 15 . 1/23
This has been a brilliant read- a shaky start, but after a chapter or two it clicked together in a way which, frankly, astonished me.
I'm glad I stuck with it, and hope to see more in time.
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/22
The article from Lucius is ridiculous. Politically speaking, siding with Umbridge would be the last thing you would want to do after the charges that were leveled against her.
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/22
Bungle in the jungle, of course
| SavageBoNZaI chapter 15 . 12/27/2016
please update! Its getting to the good part!
| Smile Back chapter 15 . 12/14/2016
hm. I am pretty sure I read your story... some time way back... but there still is not any more. such a pity