Reviews for Consequences Of A Simple Bet
sami1010220 chapter 4 . 3/30/2010
YAY! great job! :)
Cardio Necrosis chapter 4 . 6/20/2009
Aww, cute. About damn time they kiss! This story was funny and in character, and appropriately House-and-Wilson-ish. Great job.
Cardio Necrosis chapter 3 . 6/20/2009
I liked the little joke about the spaghetti. As it turns out, House wasn't being sarcastic. I love it when they do that on the show-when house says something that's actually true but in a sarcastic tone, knowing they won't believe him and they, of course, don't. Anyway, House taking Wilson to a drag theatre made me chuckle. Hilarious. And so House-ish.
Cardio Necrosis chapter 2 . 6/20/2009
I loved how Wilson was trying to make House lose the bet by trying to find a loophole but House is too smart to fall for that. That was cute and funny.
Cardio Necrosis chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
This chapter was a great and funny way to start the fic. It held my interest and made me chuckle. They were in-character throughout the chapter, and I could hear their voices. Good job.
rividori chapter 4 . 6/5/2009
Just read all 4 chapters. And I really enjoyed the story.

I liked how you ended the first chapter with House not messing around in asking the question. Definitely made me want to click the next button to see Wilson's reaction. Overall I thought the dialogue was realistic and your writing was engaging so it made for a good read. :)
Laughingknight chapter 4 . 12/26/2008
Yes, go ahead, tease the reader by leaving off an unstable and unpredictable couple such as this and a very compromising position it's not like we see that on the TV. Just a rant translated on how an awesome story this was.
HollywoodVampire chapter 4 . 3/16/2008
This was really good...I loved it man!
Ie-maru chapter 4 . 2/9/2008

Was that the last chapter?

I was really starting to get into it -perverted giggle-
Padfoot Reincarnated chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
I loved this first chapter! They're perfectly in character, the dialogue was awesome. Can't wait to see what's next!
elnis chapter 4 . 2/4/2008

that was cute and hot

congrats in order I think...
bdwy411 chapter 4 . 2/3/2008
I just read all four chapters...and I loved them!

I believe, both of them were definitely in character!

Great job!

Estelle Stafford chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
I love the ending of that, absoletely hilarous.
WhySoSerious1992 chapter 4 . 2/1/2008
now *that* is how you end a date XD
assassinerblue chapter 4 . 2/1/2008
Whoa! Wonderfulo job witht he end flirtation and then all the anticipation. I was like 'Ooh, man, are they about to- YES!"

Great job with writing the kiss and the 'subtle shift' in the air around them. It was wonderful.
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