|Reviews for Submission|
| She Who Shall Go Nameless chapter 2 . 1/28/2008
OMG loved it... Sweets didn't know! OMG! That was hilarious! Ahh!
| Liz86000 chapter 2 . 1/28/2008
LOL! That was great! So hot! And the end crack me up, lol! You gotta love Sweets! :)
| kinseyjo chapter 2 . 1/27/2008
yay! another fabulous chapter to this fabulous story! it totally worked as a one shot, but super yays for another chapter. luff.
And at night, they took turns going to one another’s apartment and fucking one another’s brains out. *now THAT is a tres brilliante arrangement. :)*
How could he be the man he wanted to be when she hurt his little feelings the way she did? *awhs, po' baby.*
if he hadn’t been bound, he would have hugged her in gratitude. Then fucked her. Hard. *segue!*
love the part where he's just jabbering helplessly - poor booth.
Sweets’ mouth fell open. “Just wait,” he said slowly. “You are trying to tell me…that this whole time…we’ve been talking about sex?” *freaks.* ;)
| kinseyjo chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
worst bff ever, reporting for duty :) sorry it's taken me so incredibly long to review! but i'm here now!
“But instead…” She was biting her lower lip so hard he was surprised it didn’t draw blood. “Instead…it turned me on.” *so i think i told you once upon a time that i see a lot of similarities between seeley booth and elliot stabler - this is one of the biggest ones. when they are detaining a suspect it's just HAWT. :)*
No way. No. Fucking. Way. His partner wasn’t always the easiest woman to read, granted. But Seeley Booth knew a woman hot for it when he saw one. *great line! but i ask... why hasn't he just effed her by now?*
“Not in general,” he was quick to say. “Just…by Booth. I guess.” *i can just hear this - and see the look on his face. all surprised - uh duh, sweets, what chick in her right mind Wouldn't wanna be dominated by booth?*
Fuck, fuck, fuck. Usually exercise helped to tame the myriad frustrations that he experienced in his life and in his job, but right now it was like trying to tame a tiger with a flyswatter. *oh good image*
He reached out to touch her face, and she flinched, just slightly. He cupped her chin, gently. "Is this okay?" In a whisper. *even when he's being dominating booth, he still just luffs her and wants her to be okays. flutter. :)*
You can beg, if you want to. *gladly*
and all the stuff after that - so hot. lurved.
| naeo99 chapter 2 . 1/27/2008
one of my favorite stories ever! Great sexy story!
| LadyxMadonna chapter 2 . 1/26/2008
So...I'm like speechless...that was *amazing*! Excellent story, you have a really good sense of the characters and I love your writing style! I think I'm a billion chapters behind in scenes from a hat so I must go catch up on that one! Keep up the good work!
| seeleysangel chapter 2 . 1/25/2008
Brilliant! Although I secretly must admit I still like the Alpha male Booth! he is my favourite!
| mumrulz chapter 2 . 1/24/2008
I absolutely loved this, not just the smut (though that was pretty d*mn good) but also the humour. Loved being privvy to their thoughts. Can't make up my mind which chapter is better. I think that chapter 1 may have been a teensy weensy bit smuttier & hotter, but chapter 2 had naked Booth in handcuffs! Tough call.
For being in out of character situations - for the show that is not fanfic lol - you have kept both Booth & Brennan remarkably in character.
Love Sweets...love that despite all of his training he still finds the dynamics of Booth & Brennan's partnership to be an enigma. They are indeed unconventional in every way. LOL.
**“And he’s being a baby.”
...nearly choked on .
Hm...so Booth thinks it's the girl's role to be submissive. Very macho-alpha male of him. Brennan can put a couple of drips of candle wax on Booth for me for that. :-)
**“I am a man, Sweets. Maybe once you go though puberty you’ll understand that.”
...Booth can never let the age thing go with Sweets...Thank God!...I think it is hilarious.
**They worked during the day, professional to the end. And at night, they took turns going to one another’s apartment and fucking one another’s brains out. Nothing out of the ordinary. Nothing kinky. Just pure, raw, hot sex.
...this statement is raw & hot, don't know about pure though. lol. It's like they are both leading double lives. The professional & the not so professional.
Like the way that Brennan was making a statement. Not turning up for her 'turn' at Booth's. Leaving him feeling horny. So much so that just talking about 'paperwork' got him aroused. So she goes & brings pactual aperwork over. LOL. Then takes matters into her own hands...she is one determined lady..;-)She knows what she wants - she wants to be in control. But Booth, being Booth is not ready to hand over control...well she certainly left him wanting .
**“He’s saying that a ‘real man’ could be vulnerable without compromising his masculinity. That being vulnerable is a part of masculinity.”
...despite her constant mantra that psychology is a soft science, Brennan really does have a good grasp it & what Sweet's is saying.
**Being masculine was his identity. Being in control was his forte. What she wanted…he might not be good at it. And the thought of not being good for her…with her…was unthinkable.
...so now we are getting to the crux of the matter. Why Booth is finding it hard to be submissive. He didn't want to be seen as anything less in the eyes of Brennan, didn't want to disappoint her.
**Silently, he reached out for her hand, put it palm up in his own. She glanced down, slightly bemused at the feel of the cool metal that he took from his pocket and dropped into her hand.
...I think that this action was pure love. He was willing to do it...for her!:-) Game on indeed. Love that even through his reluctancy & anxiety for having handed over control to Brennan he had never been harder. LOL.
**His cock demanded that he ravish her right now, apparently not having got the memo that he was currently not in a position to do this.
...LMAO...it does seem to have a mind of it's own.
**I learned that it is only fair for both of us to have our turns being submissive. That sometimes I need that.” “I learned that you’ll take care of me when I’m vulnerable. You’ll forgive my weaknesses.” “I learned that we are so fucking good together that it doesn’t matter who is and isn’t in control. I learned that I need you all the ways I can have you. I learned that you have me as much as I have you. And I learned that it’s no fucking good without you
...& lesson learned...aw...I just love Booth's summary. Even when he is jabbering he says the sweetest things.
Cracked up at Sweet's:this whole time…we’ve been talking about sex?” I had to go back over all their conversations in therapy to see exactly what they had said to each other & if it could be misinterpreted...and boy you are good!:-) Well they had been talking & dealing with trusting each other in their submissive roles - just not the way Sweets .
I know that I have written an other essay in pointing out what I loved in this, but believe me I had to restrain myself from copying the whole story.
Looking forward to whatever you have planned for us next. :-):-):-)
| Serienjunkie 91 chapter 2 . 1/24/2008
OMG! That was so awesome. And I think I loved the fact most that Sweets hadn't realised yet that all they were talking about was sex. So great and so much in character. LOVED IT! Thanks. )
| kmmp99 chapter 2 . 1/23/2008
Hot diggity dog! Booth all tied up and at your mercy... oh what a dream! Freakin' fantastic job! Always love your writing!
| A chapter 2 . 1/22/2008
Ooh, kinky! Quite enjoyable.
I am still holding vigil for "Scenes from a Hat" though. :)
| Temperance-is -a -virtue chapter 2 . 1/22/2008
That was possibly better than the first. I was fanning my hot face the whole time!
| cordy2007 chapter 2 . 1/22/2008
Wow, that was really hot. Great job as always.
| bb-4ever chapter 2 . 1/22/2008
great chapter. well done booth for finally letting go. love sweets reaction at the end. look forward to more from you especially scenes from the hat and be with me soon
| LocoGreggo chapter 2 . 1/22/2008
That's not fair. I demand an answer to umm...dangit can't think
of one. So not fair.