|Reviews for Pursuit of Gaiety|
| Twilight chapter 2 . 4/12
Nice i like it
| Kageyjay chapter 7 . 12/17/2018
So now she talks in her sleep, which, to give her the benefit of the doubt, she may not have known about. Now she talks out loud! However, now things may be a little easier than if that revelation took too long to be figured out.
| Kageyjay chapter 5 . 12/17/2018
It's going to be interesting as "Isaac" tries to be a man. I think she's not prepared as much as she thought she was: pads? that's not good enough for her deception to work. ducks on her blanket? crop top? she should have figured out a better way to be able to live with it. Also, I saw a movie about this type of situation, and her roomate, who was very nice to her, was so hurt when he found out "he" was she. I hope the music part of the school is better than it looks. Rusting instruments is a bad sign.
| Tan R chapter 2 . 6/2/2018
Bella started playing in the same room while Edward was playing? That's really rude.
| Tan R chapter 1 . 6/2/2018
Are you British? Americans don't use the term "bathroom". The Brits do.
| Saint Katrina chapter 6 . 3/21/2015
this is amazingly done! Oh my gosh! I hate you though! You made me wish I knew how to play the piano and go to a music school that has a special music program, strictly for boys! Call me bipolar
| EmilyF.6 chapter 4 . 9/30/2014
I thought this sounded just like Hana kimi lol. Interesting so far.
| WiseOldSoul chapter 16 . 3/15/2014
the story is listed under complete, but it ended abruptly with many loose ends.
you write that you purposely did this but it leaves too many holes,
ie. did they pass and graduate? do the teachers give bella another chance to play her music after discovering mike's sabotage? do the kids at school believe edward and issac are gay even after they graduate? how do they continue their romance? when do the kids at school discover bella's secret if they ever do? what are their chosen careers after going to this prestigous music school? if bella graduates as issac swan does she need to apply to college as issac since that is the name on the transcript? if so, does she have to pretend to be male in college? do bella and edward stay together through college and forever? who follows whom to the college?
just surprised you stopped the fic where you did with so many unanswered questions. this story appears incomplete.
as you can see, many have enjoyed this story and am sure will appreciate some answers and a conclusion to this light hearted cute story...
| kurtisha charlery chapter 16 . 2/22/2014
but you could have atleast write a chapter were edward meets rosalie and alice or somthing like that
| kurtisha charlery chapter 15 . 2/22/2014
| kurtisha charlery chapter 14 . 2/22/2014
lol that went well
| kurtisha charlery chapter 13 . 2/22/2014
lol but wat if edward jus get in trouble for the tape thing? :/
| kurtisha charlery chapter 12 . 2/22/2014
but ewwwwwwwww bgrosh ew ew ew ew ew ew ew omgzzz! yuk
| kurtisha charlery chapter 11 . 2/22/2014
stupid yellow teeth mike :/ (-_-)
| kurtisha charlery chapter 10 . 2/22/2014
she forgot her bag in the bathroom...