Reviews for On The Chase
Steampunkfantasy7 chapter 6 . 1/21
Is this Ryan who stands Stephanie up? Or Andrew Keegan?

Nice story!
DaughterofPosiedon13 chapter 2 . 2/25/2014
This doesn't seem real. But I still like the story!
Nicki Green chapter 11 . 12/28/2013
Sooo who does she choose! I'M DIEING TO KNOW!
Jesusfreak753 chapter 11 . 8/15/2013
What u cant do that who does she choose
Ihavealife2uknow chapter 3 . 5/10/2011
I don't think that the characters would react like this. DJ wouldn't be so happy to be in some kidnappers place just because there is internet/phone etc. and I'm more than positive Steph would tell Danny that DJ didn't come home, especially if Kimmy found her sweater on the ground but no sign of DJ. I'm also positive Stephanie and Kimmy would be way more upset. The story has potential but the character reactions need some work.
PePpErGuRl14 chapter 9 . 4/9/2010
It's a really good story and all but you need to finish it and you also need to make the characters like maybe more scared that DJ has been kiddnapped
Nightcrawlerlover chapter 9 . 4/1/2009
Oh, brilliant! Keep up your great writing!
jr.firefighter chapter 8 . 3/20/2009
hey that is really good so when are you going to finish it because i cant wait
Nightcrawlerlover chapter 8 . 11/27/2008
Oh, I hope they can get DJ back safely! Keep up your awesome writing!
Nightcrawlerlover chapter 7 . 11/11/2008
Brilliant and very dramatic; I love a good dose of suspense. Keep up your awesome writing!
OneTreeHill0983 chapter 6 . 8/18/2008
This is an amazing story line keep it up. update soon
Nightcrawlerlover chapter 5 . 3/21/2008
Wow, that's pretty cool! Keep up the fantastic work!
Nightcrawlerlover chapter 4 . 2/26/2008
Brilliant...sort of. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. Try to keep up the good work!
Nightcrawlerlover chapter 3 . 1/24/2008
Very nice; keep updating, and keep up the good work!
Nightcrawlerlover chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
Very good so far. Just a couple things though. DJ's nickname is Deej, and Stephanie's name is Steph.

And I don't think Naruto was on in the 80's. It was started in 19 - just to let you know, though.

Other than that, great job! Can't wait for the next chapter!