Reviews for Empty Room
aestivalsnow chapter 1 . 4/3
Damn...straight in the kokoro /3
Maxine chapter 1 . 1/20
I read this once, and I read it again today.

Brings me back to my senses, this one.

It reminds me that nobody really has everything they want in the world.

He may have achieved is dream, but he never did get to sleep in his own nursery, surrounded by people who love him and care so him so much.
kurodragon99 chapter 1 . 9/29/2017
No word can say what I'm feeling, that is one of the most heart felt story (?) I have read .
Raa chapter 1 . 9/12/2017
Amazing uses of words... Truly magnificent!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2017
My hearrrrrrt. You have a way with pure heart tearing words
Maxie chapter 1 . 7/7/2017
its like a poem, a sweet long poem that reminds us of life
kyuzi4869 chapter 1 . 7/6/2017
Maybe, you can make a sequel author-san which naruto find it
The Destinesia Girl chapter 1 . 4/3/2017
That... was real deep. And beautiful.
Raizanna chapter 1 . 12/28/2016
It hurts to read these 499 words. Thank you for putting them down. They're, quite possibly, the most beautifully poignant lines I've ever read. So, thank you.
Relena Duo chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
okay, I didn't need my heart anyways. Rip it to pieces, its okay
just ignore me while I go cry at my corner
NiniNeko chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
... Was it supposed to be Naruto's nursery?
IMixDangerousChemicals chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
Holy crabs this is so sad, but so good!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2016
you should do a second one but have naruto find the room that was a nursery
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2016
Kishimoto san maybe not even think about this things... It's just sad..
The Brutal Legend chapter 1 . 10/4/2015
.A poetic piece; Nicely paced sentences. This was an interesting change of pace for a naruto fanfiction. You did quite well in portraying the conflicting matters of the past and present states of 'the empty room', along with also having an underlying tone of sadness or melancholy. It was a good read, for however brief it was, thanks for taking the time to type up this work of the abstract.
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