|Reviews for Comandeered|
| tomxdougluver14 chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Fuller sighed as he stood, "Steeling is a very serious no-no around here Hanson,"
| GoonieGirl chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Ha ha ha! I love how you said bloody at the end! When you think about it bloody can be used in any situation... Anyway, I loved it! I realized that alot of people have taken the fun out of 21 jump street. It's hard just to find ten fics rated humor. I loved how you added the Pirate of the Carribeen lines that made everything click into place. Thank you for the great read!
| Luci-Marlena chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
;) i loved the POTC line, but, JD/Tom Hanson actually said "commandeered" at some point in the show.
anyways, this was hilarious. i love the mcquaids and the relationship between hanson and penhall. i loved this little 'behind the scenes' of the boys' repercussions for "borrowing" the bus.
funny, in character and a fun concept.
| Beautiful Allusion chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
I really like your story, it was a great idea to describe how they viewed the stealing of the bus. Just one thing is that stealing has an a instead of two e's. Great work though.
| xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
oh my god!
i LOVED this one as well! i love crosses of 21JS and POTC! this was brilliant and i could totally see that happening. "we comandeered it." makes perfectly good sense to me!
| Kirsten-B chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
Right, I can see the scene with Jack and I think Ana-Maria before my eyes... or the other one, with Will after the breakout...
Love your one-shot and potc in every way...
| Twinnie chapter 1 . 1/15/2008
Funny piece... I can just imagine Hanson and Penhall using that kind of arguments to justify themselves
I had a look at your Creepy Crawly too, it gave me a Sleepy Hollow flashback ;-)
Keep up the good work!
| Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Cool. Catch ya on the flip side.
| Thatkliqkid chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
very cute and very Hanson and Penhall.
Loved the interaction between them and how they were all in character.
loved the POTC references too, look forward to reading more.
Take on the advice bout the steel/steal thing and your/you're and you'll be fantastic. Sorry if I sound patronising I don't mean to.
| Niente Zero chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
Firstly, I liked the story. It was cute, with good characterization. However, you're using 'steel' where you need to use 'steal', and you should check to make sure that you're using the correct 'your/you're' choice. For example, Fuller should say "you're suspended from duty", not "your suspended from duty."
I only mention these two nitpicks because I think your writing style is great, very clear, bright and funny, and you've obviously put effort in to check spelling and use good grammar.
| goodnightmysweetprince chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
lol i like it, short n sweet, and it made me smile. btw congrats, this is the 200th story on the fandom :D