Reviews for Star Light, Star Bright
Poke-the-Jello chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
This was really thoughtful, in a subtle way, one in which you take these character out of their archtypes and give them realistically human emotions. I always hated it when Sora was portrayed so happy, naive, and sometimes just plain stupid. We finally get a peek into the mind of someone who has saves worlds, has saved the universe (twice!) and still, with the burden of being our 'main' character, has to throw on a goofy smile to let us know he's absolutely fine. I love reading these kind of one-shots that give more dimension to him. This is definitely one of the more contemplative ones.
crimson-obsidian-rose chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
My favorite line is when Sora wishes silently that he could see Roxas. There is just so much meaning in those 5 words, that it changes the entire dynamic of the story; it's completely brilliant. I was skimming over all the reviews you got for this, and everyone is mentioning the introspective way you wrote for Sora, which makes me a little sad because they're surprised to see the real Sora, and not the hyper go-lucky one most people think he is, but more than that it makes me grateful for you for writing this amazing piece that shares more of Sora's true nature, not just the mask he wears as a hero.

And again I go back to that last thought; it's desperate and needy. Sora doesn't want to be home; there's still more he himself needs to do to feel satisifed, almost as if the keyblade may have finished with him, but it left him with so many unanswered questions that he needs to clear himself of. This sotry leaves so much to ponnder, and thank you so much for writing this amazing work.


JesusRox7111 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Really liked this one:) You wrote Sora well, and I can see them doing that after they got back. Great one shot - God bless!
Summer Memory chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Many writers write sora as a happy-go-lucky and,yeah,dumb,,but you captured his deeper emotion without having to make him seems ooc,,luv it XD
Tokyo-Rose2006 chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
Ah, poor Sora. That' sad! But so pretty.
kazuya8 chapter 1 . 3/13/2008
Aw. I liked it. A little short for me, though. It seems like there's supposed to be more somehow. But it's okay the way it is. ]
Lil Tanuki chapter 1 . 3/5/2008
It burns burns us...the wonderfulness of it all burns us so!

Sora is Sora is Sora, unless he's in a fanfiction...unless he's in your fanfiction. Which is to say that most people write 'Sora' as a two dimensional happy-go-lucky, sugar high hero, with no impurities what-so-ever.

And then there's you.

You who can right serious!Sora and make him into a person and not just 'Sora.' That's why I love you so. x3

mirai3k chapter 1 . 2/19/2008

you have a knack for writing Sora that I really don't see in many authors. Everyone makes him this bubbly, air-headed little boy, and I mean honestly, this is the guy who saved worlds! but yes, thank you once again for doing these characters justice )
darkmouse jumu chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
A free moment at last! 8D

I share your sentiments, and adore the introspective side you've given Sora - here or even in Waiting. It still amazes me how in tune you are with these characters. Both Sora and Riku seem so grown up and independent in this piece - both in the good ways and in the way that means they have regrets. Well done! :) I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
xXxRebirthxXx chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
kawaiigami chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Very nice. :) I like all the little details you add in about how the town has changed since they left. Not to mention yay for Sora being introspective! You're right, the game did NOT show enough of that.
Higashikaze chapter 1 . 1/12/2008 wrote Sora wonderfully. All of your stories are really good, but for some reason, I like this more than many of your other stories. It's very sadly-sweet, and you did an awesome job. Can't think of anything else to say to describe how good this fic is, so I'll just end it now.

Wonderful job.
Angel of The Fallen Stars chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Wow. I don't normally get into Sora stories, mainly 'cause I love Roxas and his character so much more. But, like always, you manage to make a beautiful story out of this. I really liked it. I don't think there is a single story of yours that I've read that I haven't liked. So, just keep writing as much as you want, and I'll keep reading them and liking them. :D
Crazy Jay Blue chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
This was sad, and really nostalgic. I love that it incorporates all of the characters without bashing anyone, the flow of the writing itself is very good and the concept itself is one I sometimes wish people played with more to mention the descriptions were pure eloquence Thank you for writing, it was a pleasure to read.
tuneia103 chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
How many times are you going to come up with such a wonderful story that should deserve a million awards? I am addicted to your writing.

And as to your comment about writing from Sora's view, I think you did an okay job. It's not the best you've done, but with some practice you will be even more amazing than you already are, dear. Feed my addiction please, it craves more of your writing frequently.
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