|Reviews for A Marriage of Convenience|
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 24 . 7/22/2009
Ugh! Zabini is an utter bastard, and I'm kind of disappointed in Draco for not hexing/reporting him, I mean, he tried to rape Ginny! At the same time, however, I understand what they're saying about not wanting any more scandal, and everything does seem to be all right now...
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 23 . 7/22/2009
Oh crap. Oh crap oh crap oh crap.
I somehow knew that was going to happen, but still - CRAP.
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 22 . 7/22/2009
That was *amazing*. Seriously. And you've got to be kidding about the rating change, have you read some of the stuff that gets posted on this site? Anyway, it was perfect, although I'm a bit nervous to see how Draco takes Ginny's proclamation...
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 21 . 7/22/2009
OMG! OMG! OMG! I CAN'T EVEN THINK STRAIGHT!
I think it goes without saying that this chapter was MADE OF AWESOME, but here are some of the things I liked best.
Harry & Hermione together - such a small detail, but SO cute, and I'm glad they've been included in this story, even if it's just on the sidelines.
Draco beating up Blaise - AMAZING. I definitely let out a little fangirl squeal there.
Draco's conversation with Armande - sneakily awesome in a very awkward way.
CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 20 . 7/22/2009
Aw. Draco is too noble for his own good.
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 18 . 7/22/2009
I really liked the tone of this chapter, it was great, and hearing Draco defend Ginny to his father was amazing. Don't be so hard on yourself, this story is excellent!
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 17 . 7/22/2009
Hhahaha, I actually LOVED it. Draco's frustration is so freaking funny, and Ginny's complete obliviousness just makes it that much more hilarious.
I'm a little confused about Binky - I thought she was supposed to be Mr. Crouch's elf? Or is there simply more than one elf named Binky?
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 16 . 7/22/2009
Aw, I'm glad they're finally relaxing a bit with each other. Still, when Ginny finds out that Draco only married her because Lucius wanted a grandchild, she's going to be absolutely FURIOUS.
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 15 . 7/22/2009
I'm glad they didn't have sex; it would have been far too awkward and horrible for both of them, considering they're not in love and have only kissed once! Anyway, good chapter, I'm interested to see how their relationship progresses from here on out.
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 14 . 7/22/2009
Embarrassed Draco is cute. I loved his reaction to the hug.
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 13 . 7/22/2009
This chapter was fantastic. I loved their interactions, and Ginny's reaction when she realized she was actually attracted to Draco. I don't exactly understand what happened at the bar - did he actually sleep with the barmiad, or just mess around with her?
Whatever happened, I blame Blaise...
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 12 . 7/22/2009
Actually, I thought it was quite brilliant, your writer's block didn't come across at all. :)
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 10 . 7/22/2009
Ugh, I feel sorry for them both, but Ginny more so. And I no longer like Narcissa.
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 8 . 7/22/2009
All those comments about Ginny's lackluster looks are starting to wear pretty thin. It's obvious he's attracted to her, and he should stop deluding himself about that, at least. I wonder what Julian's gotten himself into?
| raneonthewyndoepain chapter 7 . 7/22/2009
Ha, I love this new stipulation! And if Draco asks Ginny to marry him she has to say yes because of the enchantment, right? Wow, can't wait to read how this resolves itself...