Reviews for An Unlikely Pair
CelestiaNight chapter 3 . 11/2/2013
So you posted this in 08... when is the rest coming? Please say there is more.
kawanale chapter 3 . 10/18/2008
Any news whether this story is abandoned or on a really lengthy hiatus as it has not been updated since Msy?
Summers-Wind chapter 3 . 6/19/2008
Should've reviewed earlier, but I'm being lazy... good job! PMS, Zan!
shounenshoujocadet chapter 3 . 5/31/2008 im starting to read fanfics of harry and draco, lol. anyway, good work. it's a nice chapter hopefully your habit of not finishing fanfics wont happen to this one.
Mater Motley chapter 3 . 5/31/2008
Yay for Severus and Harry/Draco XD
Inumaru12 chapter 3 . 5/30/2008
yay update! Im not mad it's been a while or that it's short, i understand. Take your time and don't feel pressured, it will be worse under pressure most likely. This chapter was a bit informative even though it was short. Until next time, ja~
Katsy17 chapter 3 . 5/30/2008
nice chapter :)
silversongs chapter 2 . 4/17/2008
Thanks for the update. I enjoyed the chapter very well. I'm looking forward to your next.
gaarapanda5 chapter 2 . 3/10/2008
yay harry came back )
fifespice chapter 2 . 3/9/2008
good chapter i like dthat and isnt hermione and ron being a bit selfish we want you were worried but then again never bothered to try and owl harry or find him never much like ron anyways or ginny lol pls update soon
fifespice chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
so harry ran away and is working as a waiter in muggle london interesting but why is malfoy in muggle london also? and what will happen next
BlackLawliet chapter 2 . 3/9/2008
Aww, so cute! Me likey. MORE!
orene treke chapter 2 . 3/9/2008
What a great start to what looks like it will be an interesting story.

You write really well and the story flows well. Just two little niggles. Do you have a beta reader as there are lots of little typing errors. The other is over used "slangy" words. The worst (which you don't use. Well done!) are "grabbed" and "headed". The one you use a lot is "anyways". Not really a word, especially when writing British characters, which Harry and Draco definitely are. Prob ok for American characters in dialog though.

Otherwise, as I said, great story and will def add to my favourites and alerts.

Keep it up.
EmoPopsicle chapter 2 . 3/9/2008
I like this. More soon?
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