Reviews for The Unhinging of Charlie Swan
andrearose18 chapter 4 . 5/14
This was such a fun read. Love you the way you wrote it.
zivadavidncis chapter 2 . 2/2/2014
I really loved this story. It was very funny and well wrote.
Katherine - Child of Dreams chapter 4 . 2/1/2014
(perks up)
Jacob Black in my bedroom at 3 a.m.?
Hell yes, I'm interested!
ESPECIALLY if he imprints on me!
cloemarrie chapter 4 . 9/30/2013
LMAO! First story to make me laugh!

Thanks for the laugh lmao
PastOneonta chapter 4 . 8/13/2013
This is great! I loved all of it, fun, energetic, sweet Jake and Bella making the right choice. Charlie was fantastic, hysterical and struggling and being Dad cop Charlie. The last chapter was perfect, chasing Jake, Bella calling the police and the swear words. Really fun.
GeezerWench chapter 4 . 6/8/2013
Enjoyed this.

Poor Charlie.
GeezerWench chapter 3 . 6/8/2013
I wonder ... how does Jake feel being #2? Not her first choice. He's the consolation prize. Bella says to herself she'll never get Edward back, so she might as well hang with Jake.

Poor Jake.

Charlie didn't handle that too badly.

GeezerWench chapter 2 . 6/8/2013
Well, Charlie went a little overboard.


He's only getting away with it because he's the Chief of Police.
snow eopard chapter 4 . 5/29/2013
oh my lord i can't stop smiling that is so damn funny i have fallen off my still already lol
milkecake chapter 4 . 4/1/2013
That was so funny! I laughed my butt of for every story!
This charlie is so much funnier than the twilight one!
Good work! I love it!
j.d.y chapter 4 . 12/9/2012
SagaDevotee chapter 4 . 11/24/2012
bwahahahahaha! Poor Charlie. This was so cute. I love the normality of a single dad worried about his daughter dating a cute, motorbike riding teenage guy. throw in all the supernatural stuff and you get perfection. So funny. Poor Charlie.
ehqueue chapter 4 . 7/6/2012
This is so funny! I generally don't read humor fics but I couldn't resist this. Good summary too! Thanks for posting.
krissymlucas chapter 3 . 6/20/2012
i'll take either Jake, Quil, Seth or Embry, and the cookies,

funny story
lollipopgurlie chapter 4 . 5/19/2012
OMG that was so funny the last bit! hahaha i think u have a talent for writing :D
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