Reviews for Broken Sunset
Jellybean06 chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
Such a wonderfully simplistic story, but you articulated the emotions very well. I like how you didn't write in any names, though it's still blindingly obvious who you're writing about, it makes it flow more and more...innocent or subtle or something that i'm having a really tough time putting into words.

"And he wanted to see him again, the boy with broken promises and bonds and a broken heart." Lovely.

Thanks for sharing!
raindropdays chapter 1 . 1/14/2008
omigod! i love your story so much...! _ it was so sad and really deep but at the same time really cute. and you kept all characters IN character too! good job!
dandelion-heart chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
0 nice and deep, rare to see in a Naruto fic...however, I didn't think it was ur best as the symbolism was just skimmed and the inner workings of both minds didnt seem to surface...the perspective was also somewhat disjointed, but I liked how u incorporated Sakura into developing the boys and maintained a good tone and pace :P
XxXFading-With-TimeXxX chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
that was so sad! very good, though! i really liked it!