|Reviews for Family Trees|
| readeradv chapter 2 . 9/21/2008
That's hard to remember...
In the last paragraph, you use "your" instead of "you're".
You should do a graphic of this family tree.
| readeradv chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
I only spotted one mistake: "their open to any ideas that any one of us may have." Their should be they're.
| SithAnimeLord chapter 2 . 6/20/2008
Yeh cant wait for another update in the story!
| SithAnimeLord chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Dang how do u keep tracked of all these names!
| LocalTalent53 chapter 2 . 1/12/2008
Wow. That's a lot to take in. Oh well. Anyway, good job on this story.
| eparadigm chapter 2 . 1/12/2008
Um...you might wanna draw out a family tree and upload it to some photo site...because its really hard to remember all the names and professions and how they are related and stuff...
| The-Jaron chapter 2 . 1/11/2008
very good and informative
but are you really going to take advantage of all the characters?
or are you going to pick specific ones, and the rest were there to show the numbers attending