|Reviews for Harry's MSN Chat|
| Emily Legeyt chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
Please add more I don't like the ending
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
| Taeli chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Entries not allowed:
Non-stories: lists, bloopers, polls, previews, challenges, author notes, and etc.
One or two liners.
MST: comments inserted in between the flow of a copied story.
Stories with non-historical and non-fictional characters: actors, musicians, and etc.
Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc.
Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
This is a chat/script style story and therefore violates the rules of this site. If you wish, you can modify it by turning it into an actual story using book format.
| Cato Bellona chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Holy shit... what did I just read? Can I ask how old you were when you wrote this?
Will you tell me?
Firstly, this is an illegal story format. You know it, I know it, the binman knows it.
As for the content, it has no peaks and troughs in terms of amusement (if anything, it starts digging and maintains a steady downward course until the end), there are obviously no plot twists due to the format (how exciting could a chat session BE? Really?) and frankly it just feels like one dire mess of babbling OOC fanwank that would honestly be better off at DeviantArt or LiveJournal. Not at this site, which is supposed to be dedicated to actual STORIES.
If you'd done it in the accepted fanfiction format, this... thing could have been a relatively amusing drabble (apart from that non-sequitur ending, which would be better off completely omitted), but as it is, this is just taking up space on my screen and clogging FFN with horror. And illegal story formats.
I know it's rough of me to be this confrontational with no preamble, but really, there is so much more you could have done instead of this weird little thing. So much more that wouldn't violate site rules and have no substance to it. You could have pushed your boundaries as a writer, done something fresh and exciting, but you plumped for an already-done-to-death option that requires no effort to write and has nothing to say for itself.
Feel free to PM me if you want to discuss things - this is probably as bad as I'll get with you - but don't do it just to call me a troll and tell me how butthurt you are.
| SmexyMonkey chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
omg omg omg omg omg omg VOldermort dont rape harry! U ass! :(((((( Lol Nice story!
| DELETED ACCOUNT 10123 chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
| Fire.Flame.Smoke chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
Just another stupid wanna-be author who thinks that they are hilarious. Please, just please.
First off, this kind of story is against the rules. Those guidelines you're supposed to read before posting a story? Yeah, I know very few people actually read those but I thought you ought to be notified that chats are specifically against the rules.
Also, what is the point of this story? Is it to be "funny"? Because if it was you failed. Is it to be "stupid"? Because if it was you succeeded. Really though, there was no plot, no climax, no action, nothing to make this story worth reading.
So, I think that's two reasons for you to delete this story. PM me if you need more.
| Marauder's Mistress chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Haha, funny, strange, weird and unexpected.
To sum it all up, I LOVE IT!
Mine is sort of like that. A Haryy Potter MSN. lol
| x-shadow-x-kisses-x chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
that end part was random
| EdwardCullenRocksMySoxs chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
when i saw that i was like oh ok thne i did a double take and was like WHAT! then i lmao
| IchigoPudding chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
Oh gawd it's Voldemort! RUN!
| Danikala chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
LOL! When I was reading at first I was thinking:
Tee hee, BOYS
MUA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! *Laughs too hard and falls off chair*
Loved it! Please write more
| xbekkarocksx chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
well i wasnt expectin that! yh, this is funni lolz. i luvv msn fics.
| wolfchasing chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
Snort-giggle-snort! That... is... so... WTF! Lol. Very Random. I love it!