Reviews for Fly
Lucillia chapter 9 . 9/1/2014
This is a good story and I'd like to see it continue.

Just a bit of constructive criticism in regards to readability:

early chapters by Joe King should be gone over and edited for spelling/grammar problems that your chapters are lacking.

2. The review replies should be stripped out. People see half a chapter of review replies, and they hit the back button.

3. Some of the later chapters could be combined to form slightly longer chapters.

I do enjoy the story though, and would like to see more of it in the future if you're up to it.
delete-account-please 5149757 chapter 9 . 1/1/2014
This was excellent story so far looking forward, to more so please update soon. Happy new year.
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 9 . 9/2/2013
Great chapter really liked it can’t wait to see what is going to happen so please update soon please
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 8 . 9/2/2013
This was a great chapter really liked it!
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 7 . 9/2/2013
this was a great chapter really liked it…
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 6 . 9/2/2013
This was a great chapter really liked it…
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 5 . 9/2/2013
great chapter it was great!
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 4 . 9/2/2013
Great chapter it was great!
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 3 . 9/2/2013
great chapter it was great…
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 2 . 9/2/2013
Great chapter it was great…
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
this was a great chapter!
Amelia chapter 9 . 6/24/2013
I used to review this story under the name "SupportSeverusSnape" xD Good to see you back!

Anyway, my favorite scene is from Man of Steel. When Superman is forced to kill Zod after pleading with him not to murder the group of people in front of them. Him snapping Zod's neck and collapsing into Lois...that to me made me like Superman even more as a superhero, as it made him more relate-able. Despite that he isn't my favorite. XD Dark Knight wins that round!
ReadingRed chapter 9 . 6/20/2013
I think my favorite Man of Steel moment was after he had been taken into custody and continued to wear the handcuffs because he knew it would make the military personnel feel more comfortable. I like it because it shows his essence. Here is a man who could tear down a building with his hands but instead he letting himself become a villain he is the kind of man who will go out of his way to make someone else feel just a little bit safer.
My favorite Returns moment was Superman's speech to Jason at the very end while Jason slept. To me, this scene showed a man who would like nothing more than to be a part of his sons life, but because his love runs so deep he would rather stay away and let him continue living his happy life than insert himself into his sons life and perhaps cause the boy to loose someone who he loved (Richard).
Elhini Prime chapter 9 . 6/19/2013
Favorite scene from Man of Steel: Superman crashes the drone. General comes up "That was a 12 million dollar piece of equipment!" Superman's reply: "Was," and then the "I'm from Kansas...I'm as American as you can get"
I honestly thought I was going to die! It was so funny. Update soon!
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 9 . 6/19/2013
this sounds great please update soon.
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