|Reviews for Angel's Blood|
| BlueHummingbird8 chapter 22 . 7/23/2013
why the hell it is even here?I found it in a sorry to burst your bubble but BD is an epic and movies a twihard and I will always .:p
| lilbit182007 chapter 3 . 1/25/2012
Its different than the other storys i have read. I havent read one before where bell is drinking human blood. But so far i like it
| angie07 chapter 11 . 4/18/2010
why did u mention SLEEPING because vampires can't sleep
| Suggie001 chapter 22 . 12/30/2009
I love Twilight. But I do agree with you on many of your points. The teen pregnancy was not pc, even if they were married. The birth was gruesome - I hate to think of tweens reading that. And worst of all (to me) Jake and Reneesme and Claire and whatshisname definitely leans toward pedophilia. Even if the author didn't see it, you'd think the editors would have picked it up. (And who wants a kid that walks and talks at 2 weeks!)
My recommendation to anyone reading the series is to stop after eclipse and move on to fan fiction. BD ruins the series - wish she'd write an alternate ending book.
| Guest chapter 22 . 6/28/2009
I so agree with you. I used to enjoy the series until I read BD.
It was then I could no longer look over the awful writing, mary sue characters and the unoriginal story line. It began to loose the spark it had that made me want to continue read on after the 1st book, and slowly got worse with every page. Warning: rant ahead.
Bella is a downright mary sue. She has no personality and is basically just a self insert so readers can get a bit of wish fulfillment. All the female characters in Twilight are just so weak and useless. After 100 years Alice still shows no maturity all wisdom. She's basically just the barbie doll personality Bella claims to hate. They rely on the guys to do everything. I mean seriously, all Bella does is whine. She's incredibly shallow, Mike and Eric were very welcoming and kind to her on her first day yet all she can do is judge them and be a b*tch because "oh, Erica has pimples!". Yet Edward comes along and acts like a complete jerk (glaring at her, laughing AT her, stalking her by going into her room at night etc.) but she doesn't care, all because he's hot.
OK, I'll stop now, sorry. xD
But I am disappointed you stopped writing this. It was better than the book itself. It had many of the necessary qualities Twilight lacked.
| tryanythingonce chapter 10 . 6/5/2009
Should there be a television during this time peroid? I think it's a bit early of a time frame for that to exist...not to mention the remote control came about a while after the television.
Great story all the same...I will continue to read my way through!
| VoltActionSniper chapter 22 . 5/28/2009
necrophilia? really? That's a bit of stretch. Well. all of the things you listed about twilight were WAY out there. but necrophilia especially.
Sounds to me like a load of excuses.
Also, unsuited for any age group. There are two "cuss words" used in the whole series. Both of which are Damn.
And at least Breaking Dawn had an actual ending.
Unlike Harry Potter's ending for example. Which used the classicly over done. "End here, cut to epilogue cause I'm a lazy ass writer" method.
I'm rambling, but the end note wasn't even neccessary. Could have just put Discontinued. Didn't have to bash a good series because of a bit of writers block.
| AliceElizabeth2 chapter 22 . 4/15/2009
I'm sorry if this sounds harsh but... What the heck? If you don't like re plot like sexism and stuuf like that then change it! It's your fanfic! You can't just leave your fans hanging like that! Come on! I'm dying. I don't particularly like the sexual parts of twilight either but you don't have to put them in if you don't want to. Geez!
| AliceElizabeth2 chapter 17 . 4/15/2009
Aw that was cute.
| AliceElizabeth2 chapter 16 . 4/14/2009
Gosh I hate Tanya. LOL good chapter hmm. You know what would be funny?
Is if Tanya walked in on the kissing. Haha the stupid barbie doll gets what she diserves.
| AliceElizabeth2 chapter 12 . 4/14/2009
Ew. I never thought Tanya would stoop THAT low. I knew she was a freak but still... Haha good chapter. I really liked it, keep going.
| AliceElizabeth2 chapter 5 . 4/14/2009
Aw I love you Edward i'll do anything for you. If you tell me to reveiw I'll do it. Good chapter haha
I liked the mention of jessica _
| AliceElizabeth2 chapter 2 . 4/14/2009
I know EXACTLY how you feel. I do the precise same thing getting g to wordy and haveing to back and edit and entire page. But that was a great chapter good job.
| Kenzie chapter 22 . 2/8/2009
I hate you...
| Kenzie chapter 22 . 2/8/2009
Dude...or Dudette... I seriously hate you. I was so into this book. You shouldn't even keep this on here just to let people read it to be disappointed so immensely. It's mean. It was an awesome book by the way...