Reviews for The Chances Were Slim, Right?
YukiSSS chapter 1 . 5/27/2008
This is the best!

Hope you write more about this couple!
judikickshiney chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
I loved it! It was so sweet! Zaraki pwnes the world!
Aeriel Cross chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Aw...how sweet. it's a weird pairing but i loved it!
puts foot in mouth chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
I'm honoured. This is the comedy gold.

I love the introduction best, with the four things that happen to either person a great way to set the story and laugh out loud funny. I love the ease of the writing too, it has a really natural feel and nothing is forced.

Favourite lines:

*'Kira wasn't even present'

*'He was not,however, expecting three hundred pounds of muscle to come with it'

*'"yer a lot prettier than that other one. She didn't have no teeth"' That sounds spot on for kenpachi.

As is the reiatsu, as if poor Kira could counter his massive power. Bless. *all misty eyed*

Favourite paragraph: 'a mumble of...difficult' Adorable characterisations and so right under your clever hands.

I knew you could pull this off. I'm glad I chose the right person for the job. Expect more requests in future.

Much love.
Greenzaku chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
Only you can handle a pairing that cracky and make it work!
rinda chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
I'm not a fan of slash/yaoi, even implied, but I enjoyed this. You handled the characters well. Very insightful! Good work!
Afrieal chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
Holy Hanna in a Handbasket batman that's one pairing we're not sure could have been pulled off by anyone but you! Great job it's a good think Af put her tea down when i clicked on the story or it would have come up her nose the way she choked and began laughing when Kira pulled up his blanket and there's Ken-chan great job

Rysha and Affie

YAOI crack loving fangirls