|Reviews for Four Clans, One Loyalty|
| Darkpelt101 chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
that is so freaking sad
| Kim Ng Ng chapter 3 . 3/18/2015
I wrote a book based on Warriors, and now you're saying the main characters names' just happens to be Bramblepelt and Squirrelfur, just like your Wind Clan!
| caryssa.mccombs.5 chapter 4 . 4/20/2014
This story is relly good kepp working on it
| Wolf Warrior chapter 2 . 10/27/2013
You should have let the smalliest kit (wich I have dubbed Littlekit) live, and they couldm have been reancarnaations of Thunderstar, Riverstar, Windstar and Shadowstar (the first four leaders of the clans.
| tamarieladoness chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
I think this was an amazing first chapter! I think it would have been better if you had a prologue at the beginning like it could be Windfur's dream but longer maybe and then you woulnt have to show it in the chapter. Sorry if you find that mean.
| Hollyleaf rules chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
good but horrid grammar!
| Hollyleaf rules chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
amazing i loved it
| GoldenRinglets chapter 1 . 9/5/2011
You know this was the first fanfiction I ever read? Well, you probably didn't know that, but now you do. I'm glad it was, because it has a great plot and is well-written. Kudos to you for writing such a great story.
| dnsadhak chapter 2 . 7/29/2011
| Mintheart chapter 4 . 3/25/2011
amzing. i love your brillance in writing this. I could expect this from the Hunters themselves. very orignal. want to keep on readinf
| harmonyforever12 chapter 2 . 11/2/2010
Great story! I love it! I laughed SO hard when Windfur was going into ShadowClan camp, and someone said "Pretty she-cat!". It was SO funny! Well, anyway, GREAT story, definitely going to favorite it. BYE!
| 1BLUETIGER1 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
so sad but cool
| Featherstorm7 chapter 10 . 3/28/2010
| dawnleaf chapter 4 . 3/2/2010
i like it! the only thing i would change is at the bottom snowpaw says this" what did ravenpelt hold it down for yo to kill" but is leafpaws mentor stormheart.
also i think stormheart should ease up a little on leafpaw.
| dawnleaf chapter 3 . 3/2/2010
this is good but it says that snowKIT was ready to defend her sister but she is snowPAW. other wise you a very good writer and irespect that!