|Reviews for Long Dark Night|
| Lady Spotty Bug chapter 2 . 5/14/2016
*hugs author* Yes! That was really good! I'm grinning all over, right now! The start was horrible, but the end is just so sweet... *sobs* I think you portrayed the characters brilliantly and thank you sooo much for nailing Vetenari! He's my favourite character, so that was important to me!
I'm so happy! :D
| ewela1130 chapter 2 . 1/10/2014
Okay here goes my comment:
However I just hate the first part, because I truly dislike this kind of violence and torture and stuff.
I'm just so deeply in love in the second chapter that I can't even describe it.
| Falero lero lero chapter 2 . 6/5/2013
wow. I like your story. wow
| My chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
This is probably the best and most in character fan fiction I've ever read.
| Elizabeth Bower chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
As much as I generally dislike making Vetinari a homosexual in any sense of the word...I loved this. I really did. I can actually see it happening, with a few modifications to his character. Brilliantly well written, even for such uncharted waters, and...well, it was amazing. *cough* I think I'll go call my boyfriend now...reading this sort of thing always puts me in a damn aroused mood...
Anyway, great work, loved the characterizations.
| LoveandScience chapter 2 . 6/4/2011
I loved this. Thank you.
| Witch fang chapter 2 . 8/26/2010
Ohmigod! I love this so much. I love your story so much. You are so awesome. his is so excellent. THANK YOU!
| CoryphaeusRex chapter 2 . 4/23/2010
I've adored this story for a long while, but this is the first time I've re-read it in while (yes, it's eminently worthy of re-reading), and I feel compelled to review.
This is simply beautiful. So well written, so in-keeping with the whole style of Discworld, it's just phenomenal. I had never considered Discworld slash before reading this, and whilst I look on most attempts with dubious eyes, this has opened my mind to a whole new set of possibilities, and for this you should be congratulated.
You manage to keep the two men in character whilst putting them in situations so far removed from the canon, and this is a wonderful skill that I dearly wish I possessed.
There honestly aren't words to tell you how much I love this fic. :)
| Primer Dimer chapter 2 . 1/4/2010
Very dark, very good and even touching. Your dialogue is absolutely brilliant. The entire piece is believable and everyone is in character despite the extreme circumstances.
You have a great writing style that is highly engaging.
| Netrixie chapter 2 . 10/26/2009
I was sobbing during the first chapter, and laughing during the second. Very well done. Thank you
| erisedvision139 chapter 2 . 6/20/2009
Ooh, this is very good. You made me cry with this. Cry!
And it's my first day exploring the Discworld fandom.
Jolly well done.
Bear hug at the end was maybe a little OOC, but you're allowed that after the previous amazingly well-written two chapters.
| Lami chapter 2 . 9/16/2008
Gah! VxV slash! who knew? and so IC too... It's almost strange that the thought has never occured to me before reading this, but it really was very good. Well written, not too dramatic, and I just love those two. Vimes and Vetinari are my favorite disc dwellers, and now they can be... a little closer in my mind :) Thank you for sharing!
| ducttapeandsafetypins chapter 2 . 3/20/2008
I went searching for Vimes/Vetinari fiction yesterday and found this (not on this site, mind, but this story). To say it "hit the spot" would be an egregious understatement. This satisfied cravings for this pairing I didn't even know I had. As I said, I found this story yesterday, while on a friend's computer, and today, on my own laptop, I spent nearly two hours searching for it again, because I knew I wanted to bookmark it and possibly share it with fellow Discworld/slash fans. This is amazing.
| aisarete chapter 2 . 10/23/2007
You have written a shining piece of work - dark and full of sadness, yet true to the humor, style, and most importantly the characters of Discworld. Stories this good are extremely hard to come by. You are brilliant!
| Shiro Ryuu chapter 2 . 7/14/2007
*contented sigh* Just... *shakes head in awe* ...wow... Another triumph, to be sure. Your fics are like glorious oases in the desert of my attempt to read every single one of the (sometimes rather pitiful) Discworld fics archived here. xD I can’t begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this one. *shifty look* Actually, at least in regards to the second chapter, you probably don’t want to know exactly how much I enjoyed it. xDD OMW. This was amazingly well written; tender and heart wrenching and also some things that shouldn’t be mentions in polite conversation... Though I’m sure I’ll be reading quite a few more with this pairing, I hereby dub this story the definitive work on Vetinari/Vimes until further notice xD (And it’s going to join your Vetinari/Leonard one on my favorite stories list).