|Reviews for Unbroken|
| sammie77 chapter 21 . 3/27/2009
Not sure why I didn't finish this story before- I think I got to the part where Sam wasn't supposed to call Jack and was afraid of what might have happened... Should have trusted you, knowing you wouldn't let our heroes down. Enjoyed it very much!
| moregoth chapter 21 . 4/11/2008
Thinking off alternate timelines sure is a trip to confusion! One can only hope that the story they have planned for continuum will have such a great story line as this story has!
I really enjoyed your story arc, from the twisted reality too the portrayal of the charachters.
Wonderful story telling!
| squirtbug158 chapter 21 . 3/17/2008
Wow! Again! This is a totally amazing story. Headaches or not, this is astounding. Hard to wrap one's brain around, but amazing. In the end, it's easier to just go with the flow than to try to figure out if all that is even remotely possible. That is why they call it science FICTION, after all, But again, thanks for writing and sharing shuc a wonderful story.
| squirtbug158 chapter 18 . 3/17/2008
Boy, tell me about it! All of this stuff is just too mind-boggling to wrap one's brain around. But you're doing an excellent job of it, for sure. Amazing story.
| squirtbug158 chapter 13 . 3/17/2008
WOW! Talk about mind-bending plot twists. Ba'al, of all things. It doesn't surprise me that Ba'al could do such a thing, but it boggles the mind. Amazing story, so far.
| Olafur Neal chapter 21 . 3/4/2008
You are very welcome! This was a great story! Although I'm kinda wondering what Vala and Teal'c had to go through. Can't wait to read more fabulous stories from you.
| iamdragonrider chapter 13 . 2/25/2008
| ChristinaS chapter 21 . 2/21/2008
That was fantastic! It wasn't just sap, held together by a vague premise. Thank you so much for a wonderful read!
| BettyHall223 chapter 21 . 2/21/2008
| Mrs. Pollifax chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
Really lovely. I admit I was almost scared off by the high angst quotient at the beginning - but I stuck it out, and it was absolutely worth it. Thanks for your hard work!
| Mary T chapter 21 . 2/20/2008
I really loved this story. You have a true grasp of the voice of the characters. I've never sent a review before-this is the first! Thanks. More stories, please.
| Zoser chapter 21 . 2/20/2008
I enjoyed your tale!
| PatriciaS chapter 21 . 2/20/2008
Great story thanks for sharing.
| HAZMOT chapter 21 . 2/20/2008
Yeah, everyone's back to normal and Sam of course, saved the day. Well, she did have help. I've been busy, but checked in once in awhile on this wonderful story. You did a great job by keeping everyone in suspense, and using different trials to let everyone shine in their own way at saving the time line. Ba'al was his evil, cunning, nasty self and Teal'c and Vala were a surprise in helping and hurting the team. Sam had a lot of emotional content to helping her parents rid earth of Ba'al and wanting nothing more that get back to her Jack. This was well played out and I love the ending. It was just Jack and SAm, and being a die hard D/V fan, I found this simply exciting and charming at the same time. :D You rock kid, You rock. hehehehe
| sg1star chapter 21 . 2/20/2008
loved the ending, simple yet with the touch of class you have with your writing, looking forward to your next creative work.