|Reviews for Eternal Flames|
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/22
Four. Calling a tail a leg doesn't approve it as a leg
| SS385 chapter 15 . 8/20/2013
the mob people, (if you can call them tjat) are too forced.
still good stroy
| SS385 chapter 12 . 8/20/2013
You wrote Paul really well, just like everyone else. Very in character, some of the hints may be forced, but they still work.
| SS385 chapter 10 . 8/20/2013
WHY DOES EVERY FANFIC WRITER ASSOCIATE DAWN WITH PAUL. UGGGGGGGHH.
Story is still fun by the way
| SS385 chapter 6 . 8/20/2013
A simple shipfic, i like it, (maybe because I'm a sucker for these). It is short and to the point, It has a simple plot, with fun character development. I hope I still feel like this by the end.
| KirliaGirl1999 chapter 16 . 6/27/2013
There are no 'w's in 'all'.
| KirliaGirl1999 chapter 11 . 6/27/2013
| Lucky Kat Kat Kate chapter 17 . 2/12/2012
Oh my gosh I soooo love May's family lol! We'll make sure to attend the wedding? That's like hilarious dude!
| Lucky Kat Kat Kate chapter 12 . 2/12/2012
LOL! That IS the WORST save EVER! I was laughing like crazy and I 3 ur story
| X Mika-Chan X chapter 20 . 5/30/2011
this story was awesome
| MikaYukiko chapter 20 . 1/27/2011
cant wait for the sequal i love this story i actually read it twice
| xxanymouse-eexx chapter 20 . 1/15/2011
This story is so fun! It's great! Keep up the good work! I'm waiting for the sequel! or maybe it already came out...
| LoveLoverGrl chapter 20 . 1/9/2011
Oh I 100% will lookout for the sequel ;)
| Morapores chapter 20 . 9/29/2010
It's a good
The riddles were easy by the way, but some are not that true. A rainbow doesn't have black and grey, :P
| espeonsweetie chapter 15 . 7/24/2010
THE LETTER M!