Reviews for Eternal Flames
SS385 chapter 15 . 8/20/2013
the mob people, (if you can call them tjat) are too forced.

still good stroy
SS385 chapter 12 . 8/20/2013
You wrote Paul really well, just like everyone else. Very in character, some of the hints may be forced, but they still work.

penguinshipping ftw
SS385 chapter 10 . 8/20/2013
WHY DOES EVERY FANFIC WRITER ASSOCIATE DAWN WITH PAUL. UGGGGGGGHH.

Story is still fun by the way
SS385 chapter 6 . 8/20/2013
A simple shipfic, i like it, (maybe because I'm a sucker for these). It is short and to the point, It has a simple plot, with fun character development. I hope I still feel like this by the end.
KirliaGirl1999 chapter 16 . 6/27/2013
There are no 'w's in 'all'.
KirliaGirl1999 chapter 11 . 6/27/2013
6...
Lucky Kat Kat Kate chapter 17 . 2/12/2012
Oh my gosh I soooo love May's family lol! We'll make sure to attend the wedding? That's like hilarious dude!
Lucky Kat Kat Kate chapter 12 . 2/12/2012
LOL! That IS the WORST save EVER! I was laughing like crazy and I 3 ur story
X Mika-Chan X chapter 20 . 5/30/2011
this story was awesome
MikaYukiko chapter 20 . 1/27/2011
cant wait for the sequal i love this story i actually read it twice
xxanymouse-eexx chapter 20 . 1/15/2011
This story is so fun! It's great! Keep up the good work! I'm waiting for the sequel! or maybe it already came out...
LoveLoverGrl chapter 20 . 1/9/2011
Oh I 100% will lookout for the sequel ;)

awsome story
Morapores chapter 20 . 9/29/2010
It's a good

Story :D

The riddles were easy by the way, but some are not that true. A rainbow doesn't have black and grey, :P
espeonsweetie chapter 15 . 7/24/2010
THE LETTER M!
espeonsweetie chapter 14 . 7/24/2010
All of the months do! Haha "what would Paul do?"
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