Reviews for Please Forgive Me
SirenSinger chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
That was such a sweet story! Loved it loved it loved it!
jane3876 chapter 2 . 11/30/2008
You always showed my support in my stories so I decided to show a little of my own. It was really great! I also loved how Kagome lost it! lol. Keep it up SB!

Jane
RamenIsRad chapter 2 . 11/1/2008
pros: kouga, kagome's anger rules all, the intro to your story was a good transiton into it all, it brought back memories (my dad broke up with my mom when they were in college for a similar reason Xp) and kouga.

cons: ...

its people like you make that make critising HARD.
Sassybratt chapter 2 . 10/18/2008
Great job on this two-shot! I really loved it, especially with the KK pairing. You see too many with IK as the main pairing, Kouga never gets any justice. I myself love IK, but I'm going to be putting out a KK story as soon as possible. Already have the plot line and first couple chapters written out.

Anyways, I didn't think Kagome was OOC at all! I can just see her rage when Inuyasha is being an rude, inconsiderate jerk. lol. Besides, too many people portray Kagome as a goody-two shoes. One of my favorite stories. Loved the way you were able to grasp the character's true personality and bring it out in an AU fic. Congrats on that. I'm looking forward to reading the prequel. Continue writing because I, for one, love your style! b
infamous-poohead chapter 2 . 8/25/2008
hahaa nice one! ayame such a loser! but theres one thing...

“You don’t need her anymore. I’m here. You belong to me now.” She pulled back to see the young man grinning from ear to ear. (quote) he was grinning? hm...maybe its just me lawl but awesome job!

Aishmish*
kouga and kagoma 4 life chapter 2 . 7/29/2008
OMG I LOVED IT! IT IS SO GOOD I LOVE THAT CAT FIGHT 2 I CAN JUST SEE IT IF KAGOMA REALLY LOVED KOUGA BUT I HOPE THEY DO R U GOING 2 WRITE ANOTHER LIKE THIS IT IS SO GOOD _ THANK U 4 TYPEING IT IT IS GREAT !:) _
Bragi151 chapter 2 . 7/27/2008
Haha, that was pretty funny. It was all very cute there towards the end, I really enjoyed it. But still, I can't help but wonder what big brother Inuyasha thinks about his little sister dating Kouga...I'm sure there's an interesting story there. Anyway, Good Job and Good Luck :)
Sienna-shirou chapter 2 . 7/26/2008
Ah! That was awesome! Perfect ending
kouga's older woman chapter 2 . 7/26/2008
I so want a Kouga! Any chance that he was pare of a litter and has a twin?
miharu365 chapter 2 . 7/25/2008
Yeah, thar's what would happen if Kagome couldn't sit Inuyasha! Awesome fanfic!
takengoddess chapter 2 . 7/25/2008
aw how cute
infamous-poohead chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
it was good but u could put more detail into it...
Kyo12591 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Its pretty good i don't like AU but this one is just cool good work

kyo
LadyNaught chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Very romantic though I don't like the idea of Inuyasha being Kagome's older brother.
i wish anime guys were real chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
so cute! romantic too. i could only dream there's a guy out there that could do that 4 me lolP it all comes down to lady fate i guess. great job! D
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