|Reviews for FFX Origins of a Hero|
| ElexirRasmus chapter 19 . 5/29/2008
amazing story so far...I want to read more
| Lord Admiral Ky chapter 19 . 5/26/2008
Spectacular. I love Tidus' powers. I can't wait for the confrontation with Yunalesca. I think it would be very very cool if Tudus was able to defeat her by himself. His powers could be amplified due to all that was residing on the battle (Yuna's Life) and that he is in Zanarkand. Keep up the excellent work, and update soon
| ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 18 . 5/24/2008
oh my GOD it took me forever to get on the computer! :S
and. . . OMG! :D that was awesome and brilliant and amazing all in one! - aww the ending was so sweet! jeez why can't write like that! i'm so jealous, lol
keep on going, you're awesome at this! x x x
| Lord Admiral Ky chapter 18 . 5/8/2008
This chapter is amazing. I think you captured the emotions perfectly in The Spring Scene. Wonder what Kai is goiong to say when he wakes up and they are together... I wonder what everyone else is going to say when they wake up to find them together. Like I said excellent chapter, update soon please!
| Lord Admiral Ky chapter 17 . 5/8/2008
Sweet story. I love it. I love the fact that you kept with the original story line but also changed some things. I also like Kai, when you first described him, I thought it was Auron. I can't wait for the next chapter to be updated. I think Tidus should get a leading role in most major battles... 1 thing, when he was getting tortured, I thought Kai was going to turn bad, and end up fighting Tidus, that would have been a display of skils to see. Update soon please!
| ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 17 . 5/7/2008
omg kai XD he is awesome lol
btw, if you skip over the spring scene i WILL hunt you down and shoot you! lol just kidding, but seriously, don't, please? ? ? i'll give you a virtual cookie!
lol with regards to the chapter, i keep repeating myself, but you really are a brilliant writer, keep up the good work and update soon! (or else!)
x x x AtrySmartyBlonde x x x
| Speedy7447 chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
Great storie but I think you should focus the story a little less on kai and more on tidus to even it out. Maybe try having different p.o.v. for each chapter. It just doesnt seem like tidus is a useful character yet. He needs to do somthing dramatic or risky. I love the story though.
| ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 16 . 4/28/2008
omg one two accounts: 1. stupid internet won't let me sign in 2. poor kai! o.O lol that guado didn't stand a chance XD i ask you from the bottom of my heart (and if you don't comply i shall hunt ye down) DON'T SKIP THE SPRING SCENE! (sobs) or the bit before Tidus wonders off or the bit after they go back cause it's too much importance (and uber cuteness XD) to miss out! i'll cry if you do! and we'll be flooded! lol just kidding, but please don't miss it
keep going i wanna read the next chapter ASAP! i need more excitement in my life (yawns) school is a bore
x x x
| ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 15 . 4/26/2008
omg i an't believe its been over a month since i was at the computer! soz, been running round like a headless chicken doing god only knows what for my course work then the internet is evil and doesn't let me login :( anyways :D me reads, me likes, me wants update soon! x x x ;)
| Lennatha chapter 8 . 4/15/2008
Guess who was able to read and review a chapter! -victory dance-
I am preferring this to the original... Kai is too amusing -
damn you and making interesting male characters! lol.
Did you also make Yuna more... hyperactive? Or have I really not played the game in ages lol
| TuXey chapter 13 . 4/7/2008
WOW! Yuna having a family member like Kai really puts a new twist on the story.
I would have to say this is a GREAT fanfic. I'm really loving it.
| ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 12 . 3/24/2008
eheheh i haven't been on the computer in ages XD so coming back to this chapter was really nice. lol i feel sorry for wakka everyone's picking on him XD kai is once again awesome, tidus continues to kick butt lol i like it :D keep up the goos work! btw who dies at the end of the operation? gatta or luzza (i probably mis spelled that but hey) lol HAPPY EASTER! (a day late but again, i say 'hey who cares?') x x x
| ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 11 . 3/11/2008
now i would review sooner if my damn internet didn't keep breaking (GR NTL!)
anyways, OMG! yuna and kai XD fight to the death, tidus and yuna laughing like maniacs XD lol
i suppose the chocobo eater comes next XD i always loose the fight just to watch auron tell tidus off for being stupid XD what more can i say? he's blonde, like me XD
UPDATE SOON! ! ! x x x
| master x 218 chapter 11 . 3/6/2008
| ArtySmartyBlonde chapter 10 . 3/1/2008
lol XD i seem to say the same thing but i love this story D
can't wait to see the laughing scene ;) (hint hint, nudge nudge, wink wink, cough cough)x x x